Open Poetry #7 |
Have I Told You I Love You |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Have I Told You I Love You When I think of you, I think of all the beautiful things I've ever seen, all the wonderful sounds I've ever heard, all the gentle things I've ever touched. When I see you, I see all the loveliness of the world, and I know that all the birds, the animals, the plants, the seas, and the sky, are but a reflection of your smile. When I touch you, my whole being is caught in the rapture of the most tender experience my senses have ever known. When you speak, I want to sit and cry, as if it was the first sound I've ever heard, as if my ears were created for that end alone, for there is no sound I love more. But have I told you I love you? Have I spoken the words, said the things you need to hear. Have I showed you the things you need to see, given you the warmth you need to feel? Have I let you touch me in the way I'm touched by you? Have you felt the fires of my desire, the heat of my passion, the love in my soul? Have I told you I love you? I love you today, tomorrow, yesterday, in a way that words can never say. W. James Beard, Jr. (...because somethings we forget to say so) [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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aleisha Junior Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 10 |
This is great. Just what I needed to read today. Sometimes we take things for granted. Thank you! |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Great, love the poem! [This message has been edited by Lily121 (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
W. James Beard, Jr. Oh, how I envy those you love ------What a beautiful poem - Thank you for sharing it. It brought tears to my eyes -) ~netswan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...oh yes, what is love if we don't feel it, and breath it, and express these feelings. James |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow...in awe here...oh....to be loved like that...great writing! and thanks for taking the time to reply on mine |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have I spoken the words, said the things you need to hear. Have I showed you the things you need to see, given you the warmth you need to feel? Have I let you touch me in the way I'm touched by you? Have you felt the fires of my desire, the heat of my passion, the love in my soul? Have I told you I love you? I love you today, tomorrow, yesterday, in a way that words can never say. (...because somethings we forget to say so) ------------- some how, after reading this amazing poem... I dont think you forget very often... and besides to speak my envy of the very lucky lady who this was written for I just have one thing to say.... I JUST GOT TO GET MY HANDS ON A POET!!!!!!! *SIGH* awesome JW...pure devotion... take care, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
J " have i let you touch me in the ways i am touched by you" Oh, this verse is so profound it just grasped my heart and tore at its seams ~ Truly magnificent poem ~ Coco |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is a beautiful love song, James. I'll bet she loved it! |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
I am glad I checked out your work... very much so! That is such a beautiful work, touching, and flows with such an ease... It bought tears to my eyes. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work soon .. Cyndey |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
THANK YOU! I loved this...I needed to read this tonight. My own heart molded around these words as I was reading it...in awe (and jealous) of that kind of love. LOVED IT! -Holly |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow. I am surprised. I almost didn't post this as I wasn't sure it really worked correctly yet; and there are other pieces I've posted that I liked much better. I really, really, thank all of you for your kind comments...not only on this, but all my works posted in Passions. I read an awful lot of the works in the various areas and feel so overwelmed at times by the power, and beauty I see, not just of "love" poems, which love and soul-ache, are my favorites to write, but of all the the different types and styles. Sometimes I have to wonder...what else is there to say; how else CAN it be said; how many ways can you say one thing...then I read another piece and, by gosh...why didn't I think of that!! Again, thanks a million... jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ It matters not 'how' you say it .. as long as you say it often. You sure found the words with this one. It works ! Just lovely. 'Have I let you touch me in the way I'm touched by you ?' Well, you've sure touched me with your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
wow, that is beautiful,....Thank you for sharing it,... Angel`Fox "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh Man.....this made my heart skip beats! This is such a beautiful poem, one of the best I've read in my oppinion. Forget the heart, this comes straight from the soul! jwesley... I'm glad you decided to post this. Excellent poem, excellent expression!!!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I read an awful lot of the works in the various areas and feel so overwelmed at times by the power, and beauty I see, not just of "love" poems, which love and soul-ache, are my favorites to write, but of all the the different types and styles. Sometimes I have to wonder...what else is there to say; how else CAN it be said; how many ways can you say one thing...then I read another piece and, by gosh...why didn't I think of that!! Your words are exquisite, your soul I touch and see, Your heart speaks to me through your poetry.... I have had the same thoughts as your statement above, sometimes I have wondered..is there any thing, any more that I could do to show love, how deep? how wide? what lengths? and just when you have felt as though youv've squeezed the last drop of love from your soul, you find the answer, YES there is more...love is a growing, non-ending thing...or so it should be... Your poem astounded me with so much emotion and deep feelings...I will be watching for more of your love poems... |
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