Open Poetry #8 |
Nation Of Red |
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nation of Red Born into this world close to the land Raised with the conviction from your birth Knowing that the spirits are close at hand From your ancestors, elements, and earth Your strength comes from your belief In the power to draw from life All the elements for pain as from relief All the powers to aid in your strife Nature's powers are yours to restrain Use her powers with care and respect You praise and offer honor to all you gain While the rest of the world can only reflect You have taught well all those who care You have suffered much to those of greed The pain beginning when you came to share At the hands of those jealous of your breed You are the pure and the strong You are the living among the dead You are the right and the wrong You my friend are the nation of red Mark Bohannan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mark, this is PERFECT!! wow, i love this poem... I LOVE anything to do with the amazing spririt of these proud people.. you have written an EXCELLENT tribute to them and the rhyme scheme is poetry in motion... suberb writing...this one goes in my file... take care, jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Janet Marie--So happy to hear that you liked it. I wasn't real sure about this one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, hit close to home...I loved it too! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This piece is full of strength! I admire a poet who uses his gift to stand up for those who have been hurt and taken advantage of in the past. Wonderful poem, Mark. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
passing shadows-- thank you and I hope the home part is a happy place in your life and not one of pain or hurt. Tennessee Angel--I try to write from the heart and this is one area where I have a strong conviction from. Thank you for your words of praise. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ O'siyo ! Wonderful tribute to proud people. Enjoyed your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-- glad you enjoyed them. I am on my way to read one of yours right now. There are so many great works in this forum that it is hard to get to them all. Thanks for sharing your comments. |
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Ginger New Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 3Virginia |
I am finding myself a slave to your writing, I cant seem to get enough, I will follow you and your writing. . . until we read again! |
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