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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-07-18 01:22 AM




Velvet Touching

Long for the touch
these soft ~velvet eyes~
in shadows of morn
when the sun warms the skies.
and whispers to me,
rise up, from your sleep
light blinds, i awaken
from dreaming you deep.
i hold, i waver, i cling
to you tight.
my thoughts, to savor
of loving last night.

your touches are velvet
when eyes brush my skin.
so tenderly, soft
as i feel you within.
your voice overwhelms,
it's as gentle as night
like the shadows, before
fading into the light
of the morn as it wakes
and i feel, you are near
as your breathing, now shallow
reminds me you're here.

reaching out, fingers tracing
your lips, slightly pursed.
leaning closer i kiss them
(of need to be nursed).
loving you, loving me
in the nighttime or day
or the morn upon waking
wish always to stay
in your stillness of heart,
in your mind, in your eyes,
i surrender my velvet
i am bound by your ties.

i long for your touch
as i awaken each new
by my side, you're my morn,
velvet touching for you.

M
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© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-07-18 02:39 AM


Very beautiful Maureen
reads just lovely

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-07-18 06:48 AM


Maureen~
Just lovely, lovely, lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-07-18 06:53 AM


Oh Maureen, this was a treasure! Beautiful flow and sentiments ... wonderful verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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4 posted 2000-07-18 08:16 AM


this is excellent...
wonderful writing
very romantic, sensual and passionate
love the use of velvet..very cool...
very nice read indeed...
enjoyed this much
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2000-07-18 08:33 AM


MMoonchild.....
       ooooooooooh....this is really soft,
       and sensual, and I loved every word!
      
         "....velvet touching for you.."

              Very Romantic!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-07-18 08:42 PM


Beautiful! I love the title too..
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2011-04-19 06:05 PM


thinking back to another time~~
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