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Velvet Touching
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Velvet Touching |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Velvet Touching Long for the touch these soft ~velvet eyes~ in shadows of morn when the sun warms the skies. and whispers to me, rise up, from your sleep light blinds, i awaken from dreaming you deep. i hold, i waver, i cling to you tight. my thoughts, to savor of loving last night. your touches are velvet when eyes brush my skin. so tenderly, soft as i feel you within. your voice overwhelms, it's as gentle as night like the shadows, before fading into the light of the morn as it wakes and i feel, you are near as your breathing, now shallow reminds me you're here. reaching out, fingers tracing your lips, slightly pursed. leaning closer i kiss them (of need to be nursed). loving you, loving me in the nighttime or day or the morn upon waking wish always to stay in your stillness of heart, in your mind, in your eyes, i surrender my velvet i am bound by your ties. i long for your touch as i awaken each new by my side, you're my morn, velvet touching for you. M 2k |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very beautiful Maureen reads just lovely  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Just lovely, lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Maureen, this was a treasure! Beautiful flow and sentiments ... wonderful verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent... wonderful writing very romantic, sensual and passionate love the use of velvet..very cool... very nice read indeed... enjoyed this much take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MMoonchild..... ooooooooooh....this is really soft, and sensual, and I loved every word! "....velvet touching for you.." Very Romantic! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! I love the title too.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thinking back to another time~~ |
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