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A Kiss |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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To brighten everything up from all the sadness and heartbreak I decided to post up one of MY poems. Yes, yes.....feast your eyes upon a poem about the beauty of a kiss and how it's an extension of abstract feeling into physical expression. A Kiss: One kiss my dear to fill all of me Two kiss my dear to last eternally. I ask for nothing but a simple kiss I ask God to grant this as my only wish. Most think a kiss is but a simple touch But believe me, a kiss means so much. It's all that is and all that ever was, A kiss is a kiss just because. Three kiss my dear to remember you Four kiss my dear so I believe it's true. I ask for nothing but a simple kiss I ask you to grant this as my only wish. You might wonder why a kiss means a lot And it's because I was always taught that a kiss is a kiss in every way And a kiss you can give on any day. |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Hey there, this is a Very good poem, and you know that from the sounds of things i'd give you a great big kiss if you were anywhere near me... I like this poem lots, though, and look forward to more from you.... ~MoonPrincess P.S.~ Why the name Dopey_Dope??? Just wondering... "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~What can I say this is really good...Smile cause I thought I was gonna be the first to reply but someone else replied to so you shouldnt be to frustrated anymore...Well I cant wait to see more of your work...  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Wonderfully written!  :Sigh : kisses can be very sweet, indeed. Keep up the good work!~Rachel~ ~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hi I think this is a great poem and I hope to read more. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes thank you for your compliments. Well taken! Anyway, i have another poem posted up called Perspectives...Uhhhh go check that one out. The Subject title is.....At last, the REAL poem you all asked for.....or something like that. Anyway.....thanks for the compliment. If you'd like to see anymore of my work....feel free to ask.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well done DopeyDope ... sometimes, the best things in life are the simplest pleasures. You've expressed this very nicely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
hey a great poem..and uhm...I like kissing too...uhm a lot...but I think hugging is better...so next time write a poem about hugz or something !!! and thanks for your comment on my poem... see yaaaaaa greetz Robinnn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
hahaha hugs? Hahaha ok ill try and keep that in mind. Maybe one day when a beautiful woman hugs me i will remember what you said and become inspired. THANKs for readin. adios I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
‘Ello! Dude, kissing rocks. To bad those idiot teachers don’t allow PDA (Public displays of Affection), well, that’s communism for ya…uh, I mean capitalism…hehe, uh… Yeah, you can write seriously, but writing for ****s and giggles is much more fulfilling… blah blah lalablah ba, Seeya latters, OMG, they edited the "s" word...what is this place coming to? Hmm, i wonder how diligent there filters are... No! Wait, can't been mean to Passions, likes passions, pay satan later...ahahblah ba. < !signature--> --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I [This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
yes i can write seriously and writing about stupid stuff is very fun aswell. I am going to have to come up with more weird, lame crap. Soon enuff my friend. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
VERY sweet poem!! Kisses are great and you put that into words perfectly! Keep up the good work! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
How many kisses did you want??? He he he - sorry I was just reading a few of your poems - you write well!! This one just caught my attention for obvious reasons... (snowfight - just to remind you!!) Catch you later!! Melz!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this poem was a sumptuous poem... you really nailed it here, beautiful repetition and detail... its what we all ache. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this poem was a sumptuous poem... you really nailed it here, beautiful repetition and detail... its what we all ache. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Dopy_dope- a good poem I liked it. Peace out ~Min~  |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Javier*~ This poem is so sweet perfectly put. i love it!!~*Justine*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was really sweet!! Sometimes the simplest things can mean the most...well written. Great job! Keep writing!! Luv, ~*~Priscilla~*~< !signature--> ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I loved this poem it meant so much to me and all the ones I love and once loved thanks you- TRUELUV It was rediscovery in the faith in my boyfriend :TRUEluv: THANK YOU <3 -Jennifer |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Dopey- Since I don't remember reading this one the first time... I figured I'd share some words on the matter. That'd be me... always adding my 2 cents! Anywho... kissing and hugging can be far better than all that orther... errr.... stuff. Not that I would know or whatever.... (I don't wanna blow my innocent cover) but this poem reallystated that a kiss is so great all by itself. I agree though, that hugs are a million times better, they'll always make you feel all warm. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, great job with the poem man, it's really good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, well this one was brought up from the dust covered stacks in the attic......thanks guys.......i guess this is one of my first poems, if not the first, i posted here.....adios! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem was beautiful |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Its fantastic. I can't believe something so simple can mean so much. Wow. apsara |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
who doesnt like kissing?(devilsih grin). But hugs r better, in my opinon i feel safer....uhh..whatever. beautiful poem Regina |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Oh this is soooooo sweet *wipes away a tear* You did a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Forget the hugs..........if you all like hugs so much......write a damn hug poem! hehe....... this is a kiss poem......COPE! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A kiss huh.... umm ya mean something sweet kinda like a treat...  Oh...ya mean like MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAH on cheeks From me2u cus I like this poem It's one of my favorites by you coco |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
lmao@coco hey that was pretty good there i liked the chocolate kiss it was sweet! well anyways this poem was so damn great keep writting my friend! it was kool, great, awsome and i still cant get over the kiss lol. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Thanks guys.......glad you liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem everything it says is very true and it makes a lot of sence. Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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