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Pretty Purple Lace
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Pretty Purple Lace |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Pretty Purple Lace Just as the redbud spatters woodland edge With pretty purple lace And dogwood pinks and whites in bloom A hundred shades of green engrace So does your love surround my heart With splendid hues of rainbow arc Just as the rays of filtered sun Fall through the forest canopy And sundrops dance upon the ground To rhythms of the wind and leaf So does your love enhance my soul Add new dimension to the whole As mountain springs release their fill And water wends through hilly seams Just as the clear springwaters rush And gather yet from other streams So does my love forever grow Just as the sparkling waters flow As hummingbird his nectar sips So do I long to kiss your lips Elizabeth Santos |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, you have written a most wonderous love song!! I am in awe of your talent. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Liz, Love has now been elivated to new realms with the beauty in your words, and the kiss at the end well its nature in full bloom. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful! Very lovely!  Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Gorgeous Liz ... Simply gorgeous !!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fair Elizabeth~ Your heart is in full-bloom. It must be spring !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wave Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 12 |
Your words Are colored They make Me think Arc and spark In all the works Of the rainbow arc Of purple, pink Red and white A splendid dye To the inner eye Your words are bright They bring forth light |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
I sure hope that someday I have someone display as much love for me as you have for the one that holds your heart. I tip my hat to the "Queen" of passions. Thank you for this loving read Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Happiness flows from many springs, Especially from dreamers things. Exquisite, Love Sy |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a work of poetic art, this verse you write with your loving heart... Superb, sensual and inspiring, Liz. ~ Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...I loved the title..all the beautifully flowing imagery..and most of all the kiss at the end. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, A love song?. How sweet. Thank you Cerenity, What a nice compliment, Thanks Denise Thank you, master of prose. Pepper, No, YOU are gorgeous, this is pretty. Thanks, dear Marge, I see you are in Nan's realm with those graphics. Thanks for the touch of spring. Wave, Another poem in response, Thank you Ruff, You are so sweet. What a lovely thing to say. Thank you Sy, Happy dreams bring happy moments. Thank you Claire, These words from you are much appreciated. Thank you so much James, Yeh, I kinda like the kiss, too.Thanks for your very kind remarks Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"As hummingbird his nectar sips So do I long to kiss your lips" *sigh*....got a bit of spring fever myself |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is one of my favorite poems on PIP and I've read it so many times... I'm shocked to see my name's not on the list of responders. My apologies, Lady Santos, for not letting you know how much I appreciate your work! |
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