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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-03-02 04:24 PM


Senryu: Untitled 5-7-5


Yesterday's regrets
tomorrow's apprehensions
imprisons today

Melissa Honeybee  

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 2000-03-02 05:44 PM


Well said.  Such wise words.
What does Senryu mean???  Sorry to show my ignorance.

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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2 posted 2000-03-02 06:53 PM


Melissa , Just so much meaning in so few words. I really like this one.

Parker

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-03-02 07:41 PM


Wise words Melissa  
Aimster
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4 posted 2000-03-02 07:57 PM


~melissa


this is the truth for sure! wish more people would take this and put it to use though. wonderful statement.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Honeybee
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5 posted 2000-03-05 03:07 PM


  Thank you all for the kind words, this is probably my favourite senryu that I have written.  It came so easy to me and I just had to share it with all of you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Severn
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6 posted 2000-03-06 06:45 AM


Too true...

I like!



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

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