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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-23 08:27 PM


Ablaze
~*Marge Tindal*~

Tangerine orb intensely afire
Blaze of light streaks right on by
Sparkling, as it collides with other worlds
of cosmic memory
Man, talk about seeing stars !
Whew ! Of the shooting kind !





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-09-23 08:35 PM



Hi Marge-
   glad to see you back at the pub.  
   this is great!  i love it.  i alway
   enjoy your use of colors in your poetry.

   love ya,
       -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


Denise
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2 posted 2000-09-23 09:08 PM


Spectacular!! Well done, Marge!!

Denise

BSC
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3 posted 2000-09-23 10:43 PM


Ahhhh Marge, Those shooting stars!!!!!  I do believe they are flung from a little one's slingshot....but, that's another poem.  This is wonderful.  Bonnie
Jon Mewett
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4 posted 2000-09-24 11:48 AM


Just made a wish.........yeeeeeeeee It came true  

Jon

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-09-24 05:46 PM


Vicky~
I enjoy knowing that you enjoy it.

Denise~
I'm star-struck !

Bonnie~
Do I detect little angels would actually use slingshots ???  

JonM~
Yahooooo !
That's just what should happen when you make a wish !  
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Richard Brooks
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6 posted 2000-10-03 02:38 AM


Marge,

An interesting verse. I see flashes of memories in your universe.

Richard

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-10-13 01:21 PM


Richard~
Thank you for the reply and apologies for
the delay in responding.
Got a little lost in the shuffle.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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8 posted 2000-10-14 10:06 PM


I almost missed this one Marge..loved it..very creative..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Dennis L. White
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9 posted 2000-10-15 10:33 AM


Marge,
  Once again you have brightened my day with your beautiful verse. You are a Star in my eyes and you sure aren't shooting or fading!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-10-15 10:39 AM


So this is where you been hanging out at.  Lovely verse my friend.  Loved the collision most of all but I have always like the sparks you create now haven't I?
Broken_Winged_Angel
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11 posted 2000-10-16 07:51 AM


Star light, star bright,
First star I see tonight
I wish I may, I wish I might
Have this wish I wish tonight....


*applauds*  Very good..  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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