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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Well the teacher suggested our feet Were too smelly, and that isn't neat, That the fumes that arose Were offense to the nose And the odor was most indiscrete. |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Cute limerick, Pete  Which form were you trying to display (Iambic, anapestic or trochaic)? hehe  Couldn't get a rise out of you..you're too clever  You did good, Pete. Limericks are basically 5 anapestic lines consisting of 9,9,6,6, and 9 syllables. Very wise of you to know that... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wonderful to see you Pete, poet who's not a poet, but happens to master meter like only few do. Great limerick! I may try one myself. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Tis a need that you wash your own feet, So as mine, they be fragrant and sweet, And your lover won't yell At the loathsomest smell, But will let you back under the sheet. |
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