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I Was Lifted Up On Angel's Wings
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I Was Lifted Up On Angel's Wings |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 I was lifted up on Angels wings, And through the Heavens soared. When I came upon a brilliant light, I found it was my Lord. With hair like snow and eyes of fire, I bowed before His feet. In His presence it was hard to stand, My sins felt like concrete. Head hung in sorrow, tears filled my eyes. My mouth, it couldn't speak. My sins were overpowering me. My soul, it just felt weak. A gentle hand reached out to touch me, A voice like thunder spoke. The love He gave enveloped my soul, My heart no longer broke. He put His loving arms around me, Such peace that I felt then. I was quite content in knowing that, He'd do it all again. Our righteous acts are like filthy rags, The Lord reminded me. Come in unto Me my precious child, For I can set you free. I was lifted up on Angel's wings, And through the Heavens soared. I had been forgivin my sin and... My soul had been restored. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Whtdove and the rhthym and rhyme are excellent!! ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you very much Hoot! I am excited about this one! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, this is truly beautiful, I love it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Although I'm not terribly religious, I liked the poem alot..... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
D.A. thank you! It gave me a feeling of peace when I was done, and hope and joy! S.D. Thank you for your compliment. I appreciate it. I am not "religious" as some might view it. I did find God though, I have been through a lot in my life. Now that I have Him, I can't live life without Him! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
this is a work to be excited about WhtDove....I love the picture of God that you so beautifully painted here....exceptional piece...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Pepper! It's been a while since I have written something like this. It felt good to do it!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And it felt good to read it WhtDove, thank you I had to read it again.------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful works my friend, whereas I am dry at present.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
I think you do it best Whtdove...I know that my poem does not come close to this beautiful piece. It touch my heart and my soul. Thank you! Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
When sin hath rendered spirit's beacon dim, And sorrow looms where purity once gleamed, I shall away, and find respite in Him; For by His light, my darkness is redeemed! This was uplifting, a truly enjoyable read, WhtDove. You have been given a particular gift for singing His glory; please do not hesitate to enrich us with it! Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Truly beautiful... a great read, WhtDove. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful, WhtDove! And the graphic fits so nicely! Your rose to your own challenge.. we needed this today after all the sadness lately! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you all so very much! Your comments are deeply touching! D.A. thanks again girl! Isis, thanks so much dear! Starith I am sure you will do a wonderful job! Nocht, loved your little poem! Thank you. It's been a while since I've done a piece like this. It felt good to do it! When I can come up with them I will post more. Emmy, thanks for your compliment and reply. Devine one, thank for challenging me to challenge you all. Thank you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You have outdone yourself with this one, WhtDove! This is my absolute favorite! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Denise! I have to say I like this better than anything I have written! Thanks to all of you, your compliments are heart felt and really appreciated! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
WhtDove this was so beautiful!! great job my friend! very well done :-) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Tori! I'm glad to see you posted again. Thank you very much Tori I really appreciate it friend! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Your faith does you as much credit as this verse does your faith. Well spoken, my friend. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Dream! I appreciate it! |
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