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Flame of love |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Flame of Love We light a candle every night for you to see your way it's kept alive within our hearts on the memory of love's bouquet When we light our candles doesn't matter if we're young or old it flames with hope and desire and our lives are dusted with gold Love at first sight is a mystery for life starts anew with a glance our hearts fill with joy and break free as we journey through a world of romance Once in a lifetime this drama takes place and it seems that the stage has been set a stranger, a meeting, a voice and a face a moment we'll never forget If the Flame of Hope has found you take good care and fan it well or you could lose it to another only your time and love will tell.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That's lovely, RG!  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, love at first sight...sigh....the memories that takes me too......really nicely done my friend hugs |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Your cup fillith over...beautiful job. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well done Brit.....very well done! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks all. Guess I'm just an old fashioned romantic lady.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done Rainbow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Love at first sight is wonderful, A winner in my book. Just make sure you don't have time To take a second look! Oh, I'm sorry again, Rainbow! You've written another beautiful piece and I've defiled it with comedy...again. My shrink is not helping one bit! |
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Mark4Him@juno.com Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
A lovely poem,especially to a romantic like me.There's always room for more romance,hope,and the thrill of love in our world. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: Thank you... HUGS Balladeer: you mean you shrunk or you have seen a shrink?...ooops ROFLMAO HUSG Mark: There is indeed, love makes the world go round, till you're too dizzy and then you try to step off, in reverse.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully done. Touched this romantic as well. I do have to add though, Love at first sight, is a delight but one that I can not fathom. Suffice it to say,I look for the day when the love bug crosses this chasm. Well I tried...almost got there....lol. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marilyn: Thanks.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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