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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-06 12:01 PM


Whenever I felt that love was ‘haunting’ me
I recalled that most apparitions are easily
seen through.

I wanted love to have substance enough
that I couldn't see through it.          

These many days I spend sleeping with my pet rock...

She's wonderful.



...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-02-06 06:59 AM


Ha! Good one! Speaks volumes!

Lori

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2014-02-06 07:56 AM


Sad, but funny and beautiful.  Please pat your pet rock for me.

Owl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-02-06 08:04 AM


Funny. With some truth.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
4 posted 2014-02-07 06:51 PM


Thanks (with a grin)!


Regards to all from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2014-02-09 05:15 PM


... and to consider that she is the epitome of charming mystery!

Intriguing and in a way comforting!

Margherita

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
6 posted 2014-02-10 12:13 PM


Nice! For some reason didn't see the pet rock bit at first...must be blind
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