Open Poetry #43 |
Temptress' challenge |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The "don't write a poem with the word Blush" challenge He could feel his color rising To a ruddiness of ill content For she had given his life a lift As he caught her lingering scent. Embarrassment filled his lonely soul And he flushed at her loveliness He felt so very red in the face As he fantasized over one sweet kiss. /pip/Forum7/HTML/000779.html " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, m'dear shining sun, methinks you did it! ~ and rather well, at that! I'm sure that the Temptress will give you an A+. Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A+ indeed! Thanks for playing! "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely, dear Karilea. Makes me want to give it a try too... might be fun. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, it's not great but it was fun! At least my muse stayed for a split second! I hope others will take up the challenge, m'friend! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sissie....me thinks you hit the nail on the blush. Maybe I'll do this too. Hi Temptress! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Short but very very sweet dear Karilea with great rhyming, thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!! Eric |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear sunshine when i see this name i don't know why do i trust that there is a creativity under this name. i find the world of beauty between it lines which takes our hands to beauty the letter deficited to give you the right of writing but it certainly was carrying between deficit 1000 flower of thank. accept my deep thank love nourzihane |
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