Open Poetry #43 |
cove of sulanna & hemingway |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and our passing around of the history of our own geography nonchalantly between us like the alternating sipping of something sweet from our lips letting our hands be friends like the lovers on tv do but ours are movie length touches that we have put on slow motion so they last a lifetime channel worth not to mention the mountains and valleys and other things that rise and fall between our continents as we call them pretending to be in earthquakes when no one is looking at us for moments before another song makes us gods again _______________ daark |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a cool write mister |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There isn't a way to read you without wanting to ... scream, yes, I mean those laughter giggle sounds that we make inconsciously when we have discovered something that fits our needs of beauty, of emotions, of artistic expression and of joy of living ... So good that you are humble with regard to your offerings, isn't it? Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea thanks sexy mrs _____________ Ms mar you punish me with your delightful kindness, thank you ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You smile me with this one, D. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*thud* Ya gotta quit doing that thing you do to me babe. I'm never gonna get up offa the floor at this rate!! I truly enjoyed the mastery of your words here m'friend... I repeat, if you'd bind it, I'd buy it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: your poems do such a wonderful lingering that Alfred Hitchcock could have hired you for the tender touches between scream scenes. And that, Sir, is a high compliment. |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
You find and deliver the slow motion emotion faster than any poet or man I've read before. These thoughts are gifts and the personalized wrapping touches all of us fortunate enough to be on the receiving/reading end. thank you Daark... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe for the little touch _______________ ms gs, thank you donna for bringing me a smile with your thud shoes on _______________ ms sun, always a place to watch the instant replays...thanks babe ___________________ ms lynda, you sooth my moments with those comments, thanks ms |
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