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Lost Illusions |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Lost Illusions under a vain, indifferent moon lost in an instant love… a flake of snow in an angry Winter wind the heart… a ruined city where all roads lead only to the past the spirit... a lonely spectre forever chasing dream-shadows |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fine use of metaphor here and razor sharp imagery..thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"A ruined city where all roads lead only to the past." I think this is very sad but so pure in it's depth of thought. Ida |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Bruce "under a vain, indifferent moon" The first illusion...to think a moon holds power...I see here how it is the melencholy that makes the moon here, perhaps made even greater by the way it is so often looked at, through the eyes of love. A poignant poem. Sad. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Man and Poet you got your sadness through powerfully!! A temporary feeling I hope! Whether we want or not we are projected into the future ... the soul knows and lights the Path. Love, Margherita  |
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