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"I am, I am--I'm actualized" ( an olive branch for the Gifted one)
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"I am, I am--I'm actualized" ( an olive branch for the Gifted one) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I wonder if the crickets lie. I hear their legs as bow on string I see feathers down, drifting. I want to cease the ache of sting I am your daughter, motherized. I pretend I'm glittering I feel the source. I kiss the ring. I touch the wound of womaning. I worry, much too much, I think. I cry because I am a lie: I am your mother, daughterized. I understand that you do not. I say that it is best forgot. I dream of strings entangling; I try to untie knots of me. I hope for things I never dreamed. I am your daughter, actualized. * * * I still think it's a great exercize. I know some of our elder members have done this too many times for it to hold any intrigue--but? Then perhaps it's not for you. I'd love to meet some of our newer members, in this Pip tradition though. http://youtube.com/watch?v=5_1RqyNdzbE&mode=related&search= * * * * *  * * * |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 That song is just too, too, too ... you are! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe not following the format but this was mine I Am One day I will make my life what I wish for it to be, for today, it's good enough to live it just as me. I am not rich, I have no power nor have I many friends, I have no lover steady mine but I have the love each one lends. I am older and tighter in my jeans, losing my hair and youthful skin and I have scars of experience but I know I can begin again. I am nonchalant and yawning, more than ready for something new, I am capable and set for battle so bring me a cause or two. I am a smoker, I am a drinker, I am a feeler, I am a thinker, I am a bleeder, I am sad, I am the best you've ever had. One day I will make my life what I wish for it to be, but it's no rush, I'm doing well as long as you're in love with me. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"I AM" I am slow and forgetful I wonder if I could just be you I hear the singing of your hidden soul I see that the moon is in your bowl I want its shine in my mind I am slow and forgetful I pretend to be the summer wind I feel the sun is chasing behind I touch the lip of your burning face I worry if I lost in sizzling space I cry the sky being so overfull I am slow and forgetful I understand that it’s lighter than air I say that it’s your great care I dream that you silently fly down here I try to pocket you as hearty dear I hope that you could be recycled I am slow and forgetful |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
I am... I am emotional and a pain, I feel like a mess I sometimes care less I hope for tomorrow I dream of less sorrow I am emotional and a pain. I feel the wind in my hair, I see the leaves rustling in the air. I touch the hand of a special guy, I pretend I can fly. I wonder why happiness I feign, I am emotional and a pain. I want joy and fame, I share your shame, I understand how you feel, I wish for nervous of steel, I like to watch it rain, I am emotional and a pain. I don't know if this exactly the right style or what not, but i tried. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Great job Karen! maybe you could use some help with those tangled strings adagio |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very cool that you guys added your own! Melikes, very much! Hugs to Shar--that song always made me cry. Dixie--I've always loved that one, your honesty touches my heart, lovie! Drauntz--you don't wanna be me, hon. But thank you for sharing a bit of yourself with us. MegMeg--my apologies as I don't believe I've read you before, but it's not you, I am just pretty oblivious much of the time. Thank you much! I hope to read more from you in the future. Ralph, I do need help with my tangled strings--but that does NOT give you permission to run with scissors young man!  Thanks all. Love to all. I'll be around.  |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
I Am I am gifted and talented I wonder what I shall become. I hear myself balancing the challenges. I see my thoughts turning numb. I want to know what is happening. I am gifted and talented. I pretend to express myself in the presence of a crowd. I feel as though I am mystical. I touch the fabrics of time and sound. I worry about the vileness of our world that is typical. I cry for lost souls that will never be found. I am gifted and talented. I understand this world is not real, but only a dream. I say I love God, and I know he is real. I dream that peace and love will be this worlds' theme. I try not to give myself stress, and let past wombs heal. I hope to find out what my destiny means. I am gifted and talented. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. Blessings and Guidance |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks so much for indulging me, Gifted. Your poem is insightful for me, and it really is kind of a Pip tradition--which is why some of the older members groan a bit when I bring it up. But I don't care. I give 'em plenty to groan about. Anyhoo... I felt like I had started out on the wrong foot with you, so I'm very happy to see you here. thank you  |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Ok Sernity Blaze, I'm glad to be here. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. Blessings and Guidance |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am your mother, daughterized." and "I am your daughter, actualized." great lines Karen you do it so well IWIHWT smiles |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
For the record, I did not groan at the poem but rather at my own stagnation that my "I am" screams at me.... I love reading others submissions...and Karen? Yours are always outstanding... *yawn* Autumn kept me up most the night..it was Nanner's sleep over...I am too old for this.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm not fimilar with this style at all...although being here since 1999 I guess makes me one of the elders here on PIP  But none the less a beautiful piece of poetry Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I reprise my token to you? Aha...I see the nod... ~*~ I am combined of give and smiles I wonder how I shall travel the miles I hear your echoes in the night I see in you some vision’s delight I want peacefulness to gift to you I am combined of give and smiles I pretend that you are here with me I feel I set imagination free I touch your heart with dreams of me I worry you know not how much I cry for your love to touch I am combined of give and smiles I understand all you say I say that we shall have our day I dream of a promise yet to be I try to make belief reality I hope to make your days worthwhile I am combined of give and smiles 01.04.01 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*smile* It's always a good day when I can entertain a Lady. Thank you, lovie, for popping in. Susan?  Hmmm...Maybe I should issue a new challenge, and change all the "I ams" to "You ARE" because you are so lovely and you don't seem to see that.  Ruth? That goes for you too! It's a fun challenge, and one I play with from time to time--the only thing I don't like about it is the repetition of "I am"--so now I am thinking about how to write one without using the words "I am". *grin* Another lovely lady here today too. And I must have a way with the ladies, because here is Kari too--a displaced New Awlins Lady...and um, does this mean I can rub your tummy? (For LUCK good people--for LUCK!) Although when it comes to the company of truly lovely ladies, I am apparently more than lucky, I am blessed.  Love to you all, with my gratitude. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Commands...why is it I listen to commands? I Am/You Are I am yin to your yang… the breath in your bubble… You are because to my why… the reflection in my eyes… I am tender curled fingers in your hand… You are solid beating of my heart… You are joy's ring in my bell… silver light in my eyes… I am a dream in your slumber… light's beacon on your shore… You are swift dare in my dreams… low lilt in my voice… I am warmth in your arms… You are why I know there is a God… and the reason for angels… source of my pride… bosom's swell of my heart… I am a horizon to your journey… your partner in life's dance… summer rain to your parched lips… You are the beam in my moon… I do not want to be, without You You want I, to make two, one I am yin to your yang… You are the because to my why… you are an ear to my whisper... ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 26 June 2000 revised 20 August 2002 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Kari...that's lovely! Please post it on your own thread--I would hate for it to be missed. Beautiful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved these...especially this one of yours...here is mine, I think my second.  I am a woman with the light of a child who wants to learn wisdom for the future from the past I hears sound in all things through filtered heart glass I see poetry living in all parts of the earth I wants to gain strength from the things that I fear I am a woman with the light of a child I pretend that I'm sure of myself in the day I feel in the night my child wanting to pray I touch all things gently so their truth I will know I worry about cages that won't let her go I cry for the wasting of life and of time I am a woman with the light of a child I understand love lasts past opening doors I say finding truth is what life is for I dream of peace for each person alive I try to understand who is keeping the score I hopes that most people can life reconcile I am a woman with the light of a child |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
K, I have not gone looking for my own "I am" in the archives. Maybe I should, or maybe not. We are all changing, of course, and a periodic rewrite of this exercise would probably be a good thing for all of us to do. Very likely better done without the look-back, though, the mirror being truer than the old photograph. Ya know, maybe this tradition should be the PIP maintenance fee, payable every couple of years or so. e |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I AM I am a spark of the Divine I pray for world peace I love my fellow man I honor my parents and teachers I lend a hand to those in need I am thankful for all blessings in my life I live to learn, and learn to live I speak my truths I endeavor to walk my talk I am a lover of life I care deeply for the welfare of others I am a sister to my friends I make thoughtful choices I protect, guide and love all children I return the love so freely given by animal friends I respect and care for the temple of my soul I am a champion for the less privileged I give from the overflow of a full cup I search out wisdom from ages past I share my good fortune with others I embrace nature's beauty I reap what I have sown with a thankful heart I am a channel for divine healing I follow the laws of the Universe I am an angel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
here is my offering... WOMAN TO GIRL .... I’m a woman in my 40’s I’m a girl in my teens I’m wondering what the difference is between Is it knowledge Is it wisdom Is it simply being old Is it laughter Is it sorrow Is it something placed on hold Nothing seems to matter really When one is whatever age As long as smiles and laughter Can fill your day Roniece Dawson-Bruce© Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Martie--everytime I read you it's like a loving hug. It's been a while, but even through the changes, you remain the true serenity of the forum. Kraw--I wish you knew how wide I smile when I see your name here--I'm such an admirer of yours, and yanno? I still think of you everytime I see blackbirds. Great to read you again, m'friend.and sweet and lovely Linda--an earth angel indeed. You are another I much admire, for your tranquility and faith in the essential goodness of people. thank you all |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
love this, Karen... and love YOU... I believe this is my most recent of these... though I don't think I ever posted it... I Am I am the voice of apathy within a heart of 'care too much' I now know what you think you see when looking at the whole of me I hear the voices 'hind my back - they whisper I'm not good enough I see myself in mirror and reflect on who I have become I want someone to see beyond the surface to the real of me I am the voice of apathy within a heart of 'care too much' I add another brick to wall, constructing my security I feel the blade and bleed the pain of daggers thrown so blatantly I touch the child inside of me and wonder where she went astray I fear that I won't have the will to live and breathe another day I cry in solitary world - where no one cares and no one sees I am the voice of apathy within a heart of 'care too much' I question what I used to 'know', deceived by my reality I stand before you, clad in sky, exposed - do what you will with me I oft' imagine unity - a peace for all humanity I try my best to make a difference in the lives surrounding me I dreamed you saw me as a 'friend', believing in the best of me I am the voice of apathy within a heart of 'care too much' "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and oh my...lookit all my lovelies showing up! So many changes, all of us, and Miss Vicky? This is just so earnest and honest it is sublime. Thank you too lovie! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...You dear lady are nothing short of amazing, just like this poem. Just the way you view life and loved ones is so unique, and for you to share that with us is a pure outflowing of the person within you...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen, I almost didn't put in that last line, "I am an angel". Let me assure you, that if there is any angel in me, it is of the utmost Earthy variety! lol Thank you for your sweet comments. Dems lovin' words! I like the "I AM" that YOU ARE! Linda |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
This is too cool--great write!! You use words so well! Like Krawdad, I was wondering if I should pull up my old "I Am" poem..but then thought, perhaps it would be so very different by now--maybe I should write a new one...hmmmm.... And look at VLRaynes showing up in here!! she told me she didn't come around here no more! Good to read both of you hugs, g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I Am - Simply Me And so...this is me I am a mystery Not only to others, But to myself, Barely a ‘whodunit’ More like a ‘what-is-it‘. I am not getting any younger Yet I remain for the most part … enormously immature. Oh! Believe me! I can be and I am such a lady, Well-bred, well-mannered, A poster child for a ‘proper upbringing’. There again I am and do come across As a bit second-rate, Somewhat cheap… With attitude. A mite tarty? Not now - but I have been In my younger years. I can find much solace In solitude… Appreciative of what is, Grateful for whom I might be. There again I can be loud, raucous With verbal skills Well fitting for the gutter, Or a Public Bar Then this becomes who ...I am. Thus, I write Wearing the ‘Hat of I’, That way I can be Whomever and whatever I wish to be …whenever, ...and at that time - I am. I hide behind the façade Never revealing That, which I cannot authenticate, For I have no validation …as to whom I am Or who I am meant to be. I remain an enigma to everyone …including myself, And yes! I am - Simply Me. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I AM" I am less than I wish to be, yet somehow feeling of true empathy I wonder what lesson this life is teaching me I hear the pain of those I cannot see I see beyond what is in front of me I want understanding and knowledge to be my key I am less than I wish to be, yet somehow feeling of true empathy I pretend to know much less than I do I feel a loss of something I deny to be true I can touch the feelings of most all, through the few I worry my lack of articulation will cause less pursue I cry for being unable to live up to I am less than I wish to be, yet somehow feeling of true empathy I understand my mission isn't being fulfilled I say I need less fear of what appears concealed I dream of using what I have been given as a way to rebuild I try to draw from past experience instilled I hope one day to become more skilled I am less than I wish to be, yet somehow feeling of true empathy I like format so I stuck with the original.  Karen!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I don't know what the format or rules to this is. I wrote an "I AM" poem, not about me though. But its all this pen can do these days it seems is repeat. It was fun reading all these. I am ... at this moment as I've always been thee enigma of championed hope the herald of victories conquest and justice to moral decrepitation I am... with certitude the mythic harbinger a simple feather from the angel of death the might against the abyss of chaos the dream lived within the uncertainty I am... of ancient memory and futures claim the spoke of truth and wheel of greatness the glory of all that is righteous and good the dilemma that spites the rage of darkness I am... a true shining beacon pure and untainted the cleanser of all that is wrong and evil sought by the moral filth but unreachable desired by the wicked but the prize of only One I am... forged of heart, and steel by the hand of light the shear force of order in the soul of man the unstoppable belief of good and rightness the true heart of the once and future King I AM  EXCALIBUR James Parker Haley (C)2002 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am...smiling. Seems like we have a bit of a revival going! Linda? Oh lovie, we should talk more. We have much in common... dg...grin, Miss Vicky has done more for me than I have done for her -- one of the most thoughtful and loving friends I have...um, join the party here, will ya? and Susan--I knew, once you stood up to the plate, you would slam a homerun! Brava, m'lady! and a woooooo-hoooooo too! and finally, Parker, Parker, where have you been? I like that you took the format and made it your own--you've been gone too long m'friend! I'm so flattered to have so many show up to my little party. thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am...enjoying...all these heart-pours, especially the shadow visits from those who graced these pages in past years. My reflection is weak at the moment, so I'll wait a bit before waking up the gypsy and her jade dragoness. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew, somehow... that sooner or later, someone would draw me out of the hole I'd crawled in... I just didn't know it would be you, today... with this beautiful poem and the incredible responses it has inspired. *S* But... it was... and I thank you for reminding me how much I love the people here. *S* So... you're not likely to hear any complaints from THIS old-timer!!! LOL I did, once upon a time, write an "I Am" following the formula... but it was focused more on my feelings for another than what makes me ME and I never posted it. However... I wrote this for Blondie... way way WAY back when... maybe it fits? *S* a look at suthern Who is this woman Who stares back at me? I’d call her pathetic But my friends disagree. Born in the country Hick to the core Through avid reading, I learned there was more. Brains but no beauty - I didn’t fit in. My yearning for learning Was considered a sin. Married too young Knew I’d made a mistake Within twenty-four hours. Eight years it would take To give up and move on… A mostly celibate life, Never again close To being anyone’s wife. No kids of my own, Four times a godmother... Much of life spent Wishing mine was another. Depression once gained A smothering grip. But I somehow survived Now rejoice in each sip Of water or wine Or Foster’s fine beer. Each swallow celebrates The knowledge - I’m here! I’m sort of an old maid At home with my cats. Most times I’m content With just being that. I’m still not inclined To cut myself slack. I focus on failures And attributes I lack. My wallet is empty, My wealth found in friends Who stand by me, love me Come to my defense From my own assessment. In them, I am blessed. They support, they encourage, They’re simply the best! My love for the Toerag Is pretty well known. I’m so grateful for him For that man has shown Me how to smile When the going gets tough. If I don’t deserve heaven His friendship’s enough. I’m daughter, I’m sister, I’m friend and I’m aunt. I know what I can do, Accept what I can’t. I can’t say that I always Like what I see When I look in the mirror But hey... that’s just me! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen, it is great getting to know our friends better! What's not to love! Regarding your comments re you and me ~ I totally concur!  Here is another poem about moi! Actually, I have a slew of poems that I have written about myself. Gets me ta thinkin'!!! lol I Am Me I have been baptized into the Anglican, Evangelical and Catholic Churches. Gradually, over the years, my own unique theology has evolved. I now walk a Spiritual, as opposed to the 'Religious Path', and it feels as though I have come home. There is a tremendous sense of wholeness, comfort and joy with this new way of living. I no longer fear death --or life. I have a sense of inner peace, purpose and belonging. I am not alone. I am loved. I am unique and I am special. I am a part of all Creation --a part of all that was, all that is, and a part of all that will be. ~ I am me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
from years ago.. I am simple and gentle I wonder if the world will ever find peace I hear the flutter of angel wings I see the shores of forever more I want truth and honesty I am simple and gentle I pretend that the sun is always shining I feel the dark of night I touch stars hanging in the sky I worry if I will raise my child right I cry when disapointed I am simple and gentle I understand that life is a journey I say to enjoy life, it's not a dress rehearsal I dream about tomorrow I try to give love unconditionally I hope the world finds a way to somehow co-exist in peace I am simple and gentle |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paullie? I missed you on the other page, and know I'd miss you on the next too! I'll be back... and Kacy? I believe you need less explanation and more cow bell. (Not an insult, good people, just ask Local Rebel) A cow bell adds insistant, empatic beat, and our Kacy has that! Linda, we'll talk, (not like we haven't been, but anyhoo...) Suthern? There are green-fried-tomatoes with your name one 'em. lovie! Love you! and Gentle Spirit? You are a sweet tea pot, with words of home, too. Thanks lovies, and smiling here, I do enjoy the best of the best. Thank you kisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Here I come again! lol "I AM" I am creative and loving. I wonder about the inequality of birth. I hear angels sing when I am happy. I see crystal castles reaching up into the heavens. I want man to put down his arms and pick up each other. I am creative and loving. I pretend I am a fairy and can wave a magic wand. I feel lighter than a spring breeze. I touch the Face of God when I touch that of a child’s. I worry that my days will end before I have done all that I want to do. I cry when a child cries. I am creative and loving. I understand that there are lessons to be learned through adversity. I say that happiness is a state of mind. Think happy ~ be happy! I dream of my children making this world a better place than the one they were born in to. I try to do my very best at whatever I attempt to do. I hope that I never cause others to feel sadness, fear, or pain. I am creative and loving. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now here's the real story! What Am I? My tongue hangs out, my eyes do roll, My guts flip flop and rumble. My head hangs down, my nose turns up, And my footsies trip 'n stumble! My skin is green, my eyes are black, My hair is pinks and purples. I like to pass, alotta of gas, And I belch alotta burples! What am I? ~ Danged if I know! Yer guess is as good as mine!  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I am Today I am what I’ve become What years and time have made Different yes and only one From cast that God had laid A working man of little pay Wearing mask to hide within I wonder often where I stay At times I dream to sin Loving, kind and patient too If not, I’d long be mad Sharing all the truths with you And often very sad I am what life has made of me Unsure and worried soul In ponder what each day will be And wanting to be whole Thank you for the topic. Rick |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I might as well join the fun. Here's a poem I posted a long time ago: The Walrus Door of salinity is closed to me, rotten, ripped and smelling things. Pasty skin in suntan gin & other forms of pastime salt, cooked and soaked, but rubbing off. I am the tooth on fire, but it started first, before the water came later to soak the terra firma, not inferno. Leaking lead and timing footraces. Jewcing Nazis, writing posthumously, measuring water depths and medieval tastes. These are things I like most. I am the Walrus, bones and bags skins and more bags, I am the Walrus. “Well all the apostles, they’re sittin’ on the swings, sayin’ I’d sell off my savior for a set of new rings.” |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I could have sworn I posted this, so it must be floating along posted somewhere else.  This is one I did for Ali's request, and never posted it then either! "I Am" I am kind and compassionate, or try to be. I wonder why I worry about all that I see? I hear children cry softly long into the night. I see sadness as wars cause us all to fight. I want this world to find peace, live in harmony. I am kind and compassionate, or I try to be. I pretend to have walked in these people's shoes. I feel for them all when I hear, or sing the blues. I touch each one; hold them close to my heart, I worry a lot if I'm even doing my part? I cry for the forests, the animals, and the sea. I am kind and compassionate, or I try to be. I understand life’s a journey for us one and all, I truly believe in Carpe Diem, please don't stall. I dream of friends and family each and every night, I try hard to keep them in my mind's sight. I hope everyone knows they have a true friend in me, I am kind and compassionate, or I try to be.  Carpe' Diem |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Serenity blaze - your flame has sparked a fire! What an amazing poem you have written! The responses have been a pleasure to read as well. Here's my last "I Am" - it still applies although the roles get a bit mixed up sometimes and then I don't quite know which one I am. Perhaps that's just old age. Thank you for ... the fire! HelenI Am I am a giver and receiver, a scholar, and a teacher I wonder when mankind will gain a sense of mind I hear a mother’s plea for a son to feel her near I see no blight on health in the realm of ever after I want to be the treasure discovered by a lover I am a giver and receiver, a scholar, and a teacher. I pretend I am the light when life heralds in the dark I feel mystical delight will triumph over strife I touch only on the outline of life’s deep mysteries I cry for love’s withdrawal from the center stage I am a giver and receiver, a scholar, and a teacher. I understand that time is the leveler of souls I say the bond of love exceeds mortality I dream of open hearts and simple honesty I try to stand upright when bombarded left and right I hope one day to be a reflection of the truth I am a giver and receiver, a scholar, and a teacher. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am...loving the responses, and oh Helen, I wish I were as happy with my poem as you are--but I am not too happy with who I am right now, so I guess that would make sense. I loved this particularly though: "I understand that time is the leveler of souls" (one eye on the clock, here too!) Thanks lovie, for sharing with me. I love this sorta thing... Mysteria Sharbear? You take worry and make it something positive. I am...watching you, and taking notes. You left out something though--you are a cherished friend. I love you. Ged? grin, oh my friend, Ed--you ARE the walrus--and not a platypus! I so much enjoy your company, so thanks for coming to my little party. Love ya, sweets! Rick--I am...very pleased to meet you. I loved the simple complexity of your opening line: " Today I am what I’ve become"....sometimes that can be a tough reconciliation for some (like me) who ain't liking it. It's lovely to read you, and I do hope to read more from you. (I really do have one eye on the clock!) *wink* Oh Linda--keep 'em comin' lady! We are all changing--but that last one? But this: "My tongue hangs out, my eyes do roll, My guts flip flop and rumble. My head hangs down, my nose turns up, And my footsies trip 'n stumble!" My first thought was "Stoned Again?" but that says more about me than you, naturally! Thanks to all for indulging me--and please know if I missed anyone, that it was an oversight and not a slight. I am, sometimes, oblivious.  Love to all, with my gratitude! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
serenity blaze, lovely to meet you as well, what you don't like you can change my friend, as age catches me, I am changing often looking for the me I want to be, but here I am now, surviving and trying each day, life is a gift but its time travels just too quickly. Have a great day and thank you for the topic. Rick |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow … what a wonderful thread, Karen. You’ve opened the floodgates with your beautiful poem. What an amazing write … and so many others incredible posts that followed you. This has been such a treat to read. It’s been like “old home week” seeing so many familiar faces throughout this thread. I’d never tried this challenge before, and have to say, that as I sat to try it this morning ... that I didn’t see this one coming, lol. Ah well ... here’s my contribution. Thanks for the inspiration, Karen. I AM I am barren and alone. I wonder if I will ever find the answers that I seek. I hear the whispers and laughter of the children I never had; I see their familiar faces light my mind’s eye, and yet they are phantoms of the night. I want to meet them ... some how ... some day ... some where. I am barren and alone. I pretend that the empty, hallow ache in not real. I feel unjustified in grieving that which I never had. I touch others with smiles that mask this intangible loss. I worry that some will see through my false veil of mourning. I cry when no one is watching for the child that I never had. I am barren and alone. I understand that it was never meant to be. I say that it doesn’t bother me --- but I lie. I dream that I will sit by the window of a nursing home one day, waiting for no one to visit. I try to find other ways to complete me. I hope some how ... some day ... some where ... that I will leave a small footprint, as a sign that I have lived. I am barren and alone. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
IT is great to read all of these posts from the members, both new and not so new (Like I am going to call any of the lovely ladies on here "old" ). I will run back and attempt to write the old "I AM" poem shortly...And, Karen? Your posts are always enjoyed... and that is one of my favorite songs, and my fave by Pete and the boys. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh my buddy, Kit...I wish I could hug you. I wish I could make you see just how lovely a soul you actually are... *touching the screen* And Ringo? Ya'll are all so kind to me... thanks lovie |
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