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memories of rain (the michael poems)
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memories of rain (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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when it rains tonight will you slip in through my heart anchor my soul to my body with yours will you hold me in flannel arms whisper memories in my long quiet ear will you tell me how it was then when you loved me in brazen sunlight and I knew it can you feel how I missed your breath when it rains tonight will you slip in through my heart to the place you once lived and let the rain sing us on the window |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
agreed Dixie! thank you |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate... your Michael poems are simply melting!! loved this girlfriend! RDB |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This sounds as if there is a traces poem to come soon. Very, very well done. Were I to critique [and a few thoughts did hit me!] I would send them by private mail, because one can see that this is a very special poem, and requires a very special touch - yours.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness gracious, Lady Kate! Your talent astounds this humble fan! I literally got goosebumples as I read your sultry and engaging words. Loving hug, 'Linda Angel' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"when it rains tonight will you slip in through my heart to the place you once lived and let the rain sing us on the window" Perfect dear Lady! A most memorable series this is. In the midst of winter, |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
The rhythm of the rain a perfect cadence in which to revel in the dance of love. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Roniece thank you for your kind words please do Karilea I would love your input  ohh thank you so much Angel Linda Nancy I always appreciate your words Thank you MoonShadow rain does add to the joy of love  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I need not slip in you have breathed my love inside our souls intertwined Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful illustration of what I love best about your poetry... well done |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Dang..Just awsome.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady....there is something romantic about rain in the night...the sound perhaps? or..just the thought of cozy love in something flannel. How beautifully you write! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Doctor Love how perfect! thank you thank you so much LeeJ why thank you Bill sweet Martie I think it’s the sound of the rain and if you can get flannel too heaven just heaven… thank you |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"will you tell me how it was then when you loved me in brazen sunlight and I knew it" Nothing like the rain as a catalyst for memory. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh..........lovely.......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
so true icebox thank you so much thank you gentle Donna |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The Lady, So beautiful and very touching. I wish I could say the right words to comfort. hugs, miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much misc' |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"will you tell me how it was then when you loved me in brazen sunlight and I knew it" Gulp ... Oh! This spoke to me. ...now onto more of this michael series....after I look back once more on this offering always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
The Lady...Simply wonderful and tender thoughts. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James ah ha Janette something in your past and past that and then there’s the rain thank you Paul |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You, my dear, leave me breathless. I really can't express how deeply I am feeling the michael poems - but I savor each one as emotion just reaches in and wraps around my heart. You are beautiful. A |
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