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Blue Sky Nights |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Blue sky nights - the sun beams shine yellow bright Chokecherry flower breezes sweetens my nights And midnight sunshine bends to brush at my face The chickadee’s song serves to offer loving embrace The lick the sun rays warms the end of my nose Blue sky nights - the sun beckons me to frolic and play Night wanes to morning with no end mark of day The boat gently dances as the river laughs and swims by While sunset marries sunrise with barely a sigh The perfume of the night is the scent of the rose Blue sky nights - the sun flirts with dusky dawn clouds The world wrapped in quiet, no noise-makers allowed Flowers litter the river banks in clusters of colorful hues It is the magic of summer and of nights painted in blue The night lit with sunshine brings the day to a close Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful scene! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"the sun flirts with dusky dawn clouds" I've seen this very thing aziza and never had the words to describe it pretty nicely done |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, this was simply beautiful my friend, painted the scene in my mind and it will rest there for quite a while, one of your best, thanks for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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arbpoet Junior Member
since 2006-11-22
Posts 38 |
Very beautiful. Powerful imagery. Thank you for sharing |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you - I have been trying to play with styles of writing and I have always loved to play with words. I do appreciate you taking a second to read and respond. It means a lot to me. Alison |
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