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Teen Poetry #8

Letting go #2

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-02-02 11:25 PM

I'm sorry guys before i messed up in writing this poem cuz it was my first time posting on here and i was excited and in a hurry to see how people feel about my poem. So i am writing how it is and how it will stay lol

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Tears running down my face

thinking of you

Walking in a steady pace

Trying to start anew

Your death was a giant blow

I'll never forget your face

But in my heart i'll always know

Your love left its trace

My hands are shaking

But i dont know why

But your new life

Is the sky

Your never ending love

Shines down on me

Like the wings of a dove

Is now set free

My heart has moved on now

So goodbye and farewell

I loved you so much

I bet you could tell

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (02-03-2008 12:04 AM).]

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-02-02 11:27 PM

love the orginal and love this.. just as good as the first i think.. keep the poems comming..
Much Love,
Jess

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-03 12:01 PM

jees this is the origianal. the one before was not complete and this is the actual one that i wrote. so yeah but thanks!

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

3 posted 2008-02-03 12:21 PM

zach this is great love it!

~-Keagan-~

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