I Am (begging you guys to pretty pleasae read this)

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Teen Poetry #8

I Am (begging you guys to pretty pleasae read this)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-12-13 03:57 PM

I Am

I am the ray of light
That cuts right through
The broken blinds that you hold
Hostage in your room

I am from sunny shores
With unfiltered sunshine lighting rays
And children’s screams and laughter
(Those keep me up all day)

I am a small and gentle voice
And a loud and deadly stare
I am the words of many nights and days
And the wheat like color hair

I am the slight in stature
But also the large in heart
I am the large eye stare
That keeps our worlds apart

I am the last of my kind
Till my star eyed child comes
I am a wild rose
That no man yet has won

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (12-13-2007 09:36 PM).]

wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03

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1 posted 2007-12-14 08:55 PM

i like it. ;]

SEA

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2 posted 2007-12-14 11:16 PM

"I am a small and gentle voice
And a loud and deadly stare"

"I am the slight in stature
But also the large in heart"

loved those parts

very much enjoyed all of it, those lines just struck me as awesome.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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3 posted 2007-12-15 02:51 AM

Oh Kate Darling this has got to be one of my favorites from you.. it was beautiful

Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 2007-12-15 09:49 AM

thanks to you all. i enjoyed writing this. it was for some challenge in the poetry challenge.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

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5 posted 2007-12-16 06:57 AM

KATE KATE KATE.. i must learn to keep my socks off before reading your poems.. Cause everytime i read one u blow them off.. lol.. Yea lame joke i know but its the thought that counts and i really loved this.. One of ur best... Except you stole the title or the poem i was about to post... so now i have to go think of another but hell it was worth the pair of socks..

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2007-12-16 09:56 AM

awwwwwwwww thanks! that means alot, and it may just be my wacked sense of humor, but i thought your joke was pretty cute. and very thoughtful.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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