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Elemental Warrior Junior Member
since 2009-05-27
Posts 20North Carolina |
What wind blows north Only the sun may know With the flow of the world the dust gathering Shall he be known. In the cool of the rise What blazes go south The drink runs smooth While the strengths share Shall she be known. What flow splits Brought the heat Betray the still That creates the bone Shall IT be known. What wonders may pass And adventures can float To the gentle breeze Our sun must be Will they bestow |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Welcome Keith! A very Powerful entrance to PIP! you arrive with a bang! Enjoyed your poem! ~ARH |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
True. Quite a fireworks show for a first post. Impressive. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Elemental Warrior Junior Member
since 2009-05-27
Posts 20North Carolina |
Thank you for your replies. I'm amazed anyone liked them. Is there anything I can work on with it? |
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