Open Poetry #44 |
Sleeping Seraph |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Though our sphere be wracked with grief As heavens rain their tears She is a thing that cannot feel The touch of mortal years. Sleeping sweetly, dreams of Eden A thousand lifetimes old, She shows no sign of time’s cruel hand Resplendent to behold. She awaits a blessed time When man will find his means, A silent watcher in the dark I am keeper of her dreams. Dedicated to Shannon Rose Kelly, my beloved. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (02-17-2009 07:53 PM).] |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
This is beautiful A fitting tribute to your lost love very well penned Thank you for sharing this with us |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Suncleaver, the picture, the title, the words, it was all, perfect. What a wonderful talent you have! Richy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are a truly talented poet, Suncleaver. I always look forward to your next post. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...a beautiful write...my favorite line: "She shows no sign of time’s cruel hand Resplendent to behold" |
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