Open Poetry #44 |
Twilight Passion Play |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is intended as a Valentine's Day gift for my beloved in Scotland so please tell me your opinions before I set it to print and post. Thanks guys. Shadow and light entwine in the evening, Mournful clouds with a lovers moon, Twilight passion play on a dark stage Come take my hand, grant me this boon. Follow me through the silver fir trees Threads of starlight light our path, A breathless adventure through spring woods You tilt your head and gaily laugh. Luna mercury from the shrouded heavens Softly plays upon your face, Illuminating a seraphic visage, I’m lost in love as we embrace. As shadow and light we intertwine Within this sacred glade we’ll stay On lavender scented bracken stages Enact our twilight passion play. Dedicated to Shannon Rose Kelly, my beloved. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (02-17-2009 07:55 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, Luke, I love it, as surely your Shannon will love it too! And I also adore the three new words I learned: boon, glade, bracken ... such romantic scenery!! A beautiful Valentine, no doubt! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Follow me through the silver fir trees Threads of starlight light our path, A breathless adventure through spring woods You tilt your head and gaily laugh." Very romantic, Luke. Send it, for it reads straight from the heart. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope you sent this, Luke. I haven't been on the site for a few days so I just read it and know that Shannon would love it. Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh, I think your sweetheart will love this poem. I think you should send it. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i very rarely like rhyming poetry but this has good thoughtful content in it |
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