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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-07-04 01:39 PM



Those fancy plots of colors
attracted, caught my eye
much like a cat catching a mouse
but on this day the mice will run free
and my longing to have some fun
has transformed me
into a mouse
and brought me joy
on the day of celebrating freedom.

(Run and play mice. These days are yours.By the way, I love what you've done with the place.)

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew and EtherealCriminal. message me if you feel.

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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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Florida
1 posted 2005-07-04 02:59 PM


This is a cute poem. I just hope I get up Episodes 3 - 6 of my Mice Wars poem. LOL A little take off of Star Wars.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

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Washington State
2 posted 2005-07-04 03:04 PM


Yes indeed isn't this fun?  Joyce
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2005-07-04 06:10 PM


Welcome to the craziness...sometimes it's fun to be silly. Thanks for joining in!!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-07-05 08:21 AM


~ and a youthful and spirited transformation you have made! Star 16

Don Juan, not only are you a lover ~ you're a funner! lol

Hope you had a happy 4th!



Angel Mouse
Angelic Mouse

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