Open Poetry #39 |
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I Feel You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
I Feel You the wind has whispered you a thousand times above the barriers of space through branches it swiftly slips as some invisible liquid seeping across miles crawling over rock etching a timeless name it does not flow around me it travels through me to the edges of me completely and in its whispers I feel you I feel you “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
A wonderful and touching poem, Helen. I enjoyed it immensely. I'm glad to see you are not "cynical and drunk and boring someone in some dark cafe" ![]() "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
Take me away |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and in its whispers I feel you I feel you" this whispers to me too Helen haunting... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such tender sentiment. Lovely thoughts Helen. ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The wind, like an invisible liquid...now, I really like that anaology...the poem's lovely, H.....*hugs*......jo |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Helen, this was soft as a breeze from beginning to tender end. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ This is as lovely a penning as I've ever read from the ink of your pen~ A keeper of thought, for sure~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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