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Open Poetry #39

Dreamers In The Night

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-05 01:38 PM

As Always, i thank all those who read my poems for their time. and i thank their words both critics and congratulations. i really thank them because because i feel that i'm accepted i can keep writing.

Well here it goes,

Dreamers in the Night

dreamers
always thinking on their dreams
trying to remember
things they have forgotten

and i
and i am just like them
another dreamer in the night
but i refuse to dream tonight
i want to live instead of dreaming
just for tonight
accept the risks
live mi life

dreamers
always waiting to wake up
and share their dreams
with the people
and then keep dreaming

dreamers
they are always looking
in the opposite direction
as if they lived in another world
the world of their dreams

and i
and i am just like them
another dreamer in the night
but i refuse to dream tonight
i want to see the stars
instead of just dreaming with them
i want to stop dreaming and live
just for tonight

ChePacifica
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 58
Ignore Alien Orders

1 posted 2006-10-05 07:38 PM

this is Excellent!

mas fina!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-10-06 12:55 PM

This felt like a song it was so lyrical..enjoyed!

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-06 05:26 PM

thank you for reading...
i'm glad you enjoyed!..

see ya

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