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...One Last Fling....
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...One Last Fling.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. Announcing a change in wind- The morning sun paints the sky electric blue a festive backdrop to nature's last party before winter. The woods celebrate- giddy, swaying, drunk with earth nectar... Trees dance with the strong breezes until gowns blazing in copper, scarlet, and gold rustle, flutter, and whirl to the ground. The sun departs- A haze of smoke from ancient Indian fires clings to the blue-grey horizon: Reluctant revelers silently slip into frosty slumber And wait for the warm kiss of spring to Invite them to her annual ball. . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedOne~ 'Trees dance with the strong breezes until gowns blazing in copper, scarlet, and gold rustle, flutter, and whirl to the ground. The sun departs- A haze of smoke from ancient Indian fires clings to the blue-grey horizon: Reluctant revelers silently slip into frosty slumber And wait for the warm kiss of spring to Invite them to her annual ball.' Do I LOVE it ???? Oh, you betchum, Red Ryder !! Such a beautiful breath of refreshing word display~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Oh so lovely! This is a wonderful time of year to celebrate And you do it so well. aziza |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy....There is a place in each of us that celebrates the changing. How lovely is yours! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed this whole bunches...loved the visuals and today here in PA, believe me, we are both feeling and seeing the grand buffet of colors...cooler weather, along with a full moon early this morning.... hugs to you and thank you for this |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful imagery Tinker. You paint pictures with words. believe in what your heart feels... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what a wonderful party I want to be there lovely autumn Nancy... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
loved this Nancy - beautiful images you paint - Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You paint my heart here. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
you always depict wonders in your writes Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, absolutely marvelous writing, my friend! So beautiful, this is. Have a nice holiday, sweet lady. Your tags should be waiting when you return. Stay safe on your trip. Love you. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh the impending change of season...I do love your words Nancy...they paint such a wonderous picture |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I want to go dancing with those trees.....*smile*.....jo |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
the sweet smell of jasmine on a not-quite-bright-yet morning. And you know its come back round again. Lovely season. Lovelier poem. Cheye xx |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
well done arthur |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Happy Thanksgiving Tinker. Do I smell pumpkin pie?? believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all so very much for your great replies!~  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Nancy, though I do admit I prefer spring and summer over the other two seasons, there is such beauty in every seasonal transition, and every reveler will always be invited to share in the delight of every seasonal feast, yay! (does happy autumn airhop) Yay, this is pretty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are one of a select few that write of the seasons and the changes so very very well. stiffly bows to her in humble reverence... |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Enchantress- The chnging of the seasons, the changing of the spirit - you have captured life once again. Lovely! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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