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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-19 05:26 PM


A Truth That Lives Within Love


If I liked her and she didn't like me,
what would it matter if I liked her?
This is a question desiring answers.

If I was willing to share my day with her
and she only wished to share a moment, what
would desire do with the rest of the day?

If I thought she was something and she thought
I was nothing, how could she become my everything?

Now a few words concerning a certain woman.
"She said that she liked me because I treated
her so good, I told her I treated her so
good because I liked her."

There's a truth that lives within love,
so pristine and precious and pure,
there's a woman that wants to be with me,
as surely as I want to be with her.


JamesLee
18October
2006


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-10-19 05:56 PM


James,
Excellent and true. Understanding comes with time.

jarrett
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2 posted 2006-10-19 07:01 PM


If I liked her and she didn't like me,
what would it matter if I liked her?

This is an amazing poem. I love this question it makes me think.

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-19 09:45 PM



yes James
there is a woman who wants to be with you
your question poem
has an answer...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-10-20 06:22 PM


Thank you Seymour, jarrett and The Lady for the nice responses...James
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5 posted 2006-10-22 10:01 PM




(wipes tear) Oh James, this was so beautiful it made me cry a few tears because I truly believe there is someone special for everyone in the world, and you deserve ever so much to be happy and we all wish that for you here, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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