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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-10-04 05:06 PM



I remember once
you called me silly  
I wanted something from you    
so badly I could taste it  
so
in a tiny red dress
I
danced  
all
the
way
around
it
    
silly
you said  
why didn’t you just ask  

dammit
ladies hate
to ask

how was my dancing?


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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-10-04 05:10 PM


ladyone, dang and you dance too? hell yes I would ask, enjoyed you ms
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-04 05:15 PM



sometimes
Stranger
a lady loves
to be called
silly...
thank you

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-10-04 05:28 PM


I think the red of this blush rush
looks pretty good on you.




The Lady
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4 posted 2006-10-04 05:34 PM




thank you
Karilea
I truly am blushing
now...


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2006-10-04 05:35 PM


Lady
Ladies always love to try shoes on.

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-04 05:37 PM




Sir Sy!
how true
and we love
to take them off
to dance
  

Martie
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7 posted 2006-10-04 06:00 PM


Lady... I love the honesty in this...makes me smile.  
CastleGuard
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8 posted 2006-10-04 06:55 PM



"...And I want someone to love me
Someone who really understands...

...Want a man to hold me
Not some fool who ask me why..."

Diana Krall
"Love Me Like a Man"



CG

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9 posted 2006-10-04 07:27 PM


yup Kate, I'm with you, just HATE having to ask.....

enjoyed the dance very much Kate.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2006-10-04 10:08 PM


LOL

this is so cute Kate!

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2006-10-04 10:14 PM


Loved this!
The Lady
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12 posted 2006-10-04 10:42 PM


thank you
for your sweet smile
Martie…

CG
could you sing that
one more time please?
nice voice
great song
thank you….

asking is so hard
huh Donna
thank you …

thank you
for the laugh
Dixie…

thank you TD
  

sewasham
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13 posted 2006-10-04 10:54 PM


Lol. What treat this was, dancing and all. Take care and Have fun. Steve


The Lady
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14 posted 2006-10-04 10:56 PM




thank you Steve...

miscellanea
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15 posted 2006-10-04 11:01 PM


Great job!  I like the way you took a serious subject and gave it so much color.  Nice to read you again.  I've been so busy that I feel guilty writing and not responding much.  (Been putting in 14-15 hours days for one job--with no extra thanks or pay, and am having to write my poetry to keep from blowing a big, bad fuse!)  Whether I respond regularly or not, know that you are one of my favorite poets here.

take care,
misc

The Lady
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16 posted 2006-10-04 11:05 PM




thank you misc

you are a favorite of mine
too...

Kate


aziza
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17 posted 2006-10-05 01:35 AM


Your dancing is sexy
and so silly
Keep on steppin' smartly

I love this.

aziza

The Lady
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18 posted 2006-10-05 01:38 AM





thank you
aziza...


Enchantress
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19 posted 2006-10-05 09:17 AM


Just as your words
danced
down
the page..

Lovely...this and you.
I so much enjoy your work.

Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Refugee
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20 posted 2006-10-05 09:37 AM


One should not have to ask, but just KNOW...

I liked the imagery though. A red dress, hmmm.

The Lady
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21 posted 2006-10-05 01:28 PM



Nancy
thank you so much…
hugs to you

that’s what I thought too
Refugee…  
thank you

MoonShadow
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22 posted 2007-03-12 10:09 PM


  Beautiful dance!!  No need to ask... for actions speak louder than words... and hearts grown together to share the same soul know without speaking. Yet, I am sure that I would love to see the dance.

          MoonShadow
.

The Lady
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23 posted 2007-03-13 12:57 PM




sigh... then I shall dance for you
Sir Moonshadow

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