Open Poetry #39 |
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Maria Isabel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest ![]() |
so it is you Maria Isabel I see your toes around the corner hear your soft black eyes call me you are the reason I am in Spain ven aqui muchacha come here girl que paso? me pinché el dedo cogiendo rosas I pricked my finger while picking roses white and pink para usted mi dama for you my lady it bleeds weeps me lick it? si mi hija my child déme dos besos give me two kisses one for each cheek but la niña is gone again I am alone in Spain silence dissolving at my ear y dos besos one on each cheek last time I was here Maria Isabel was much older and she bade me remember un deseo a craving yet to come a longing for answers I long y I crave |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
You are going to do it again, aren't you? You are going to get me and everyone else on this site hooked on a continuing work in progress. You are going to have us stay up late just in case you post, or get up early, just in case you post, then slam us with an ending that leaves us gasping. Well bring it on, Lady! I'm ready for it this time! I love this so much! Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sandra you make me laugh I have no idea what I'm doing I just know my muse has called me to Spain... thank you so very much ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah and you look so lovely there in Spain sweet lady. This is beautiful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wrote of a mantilla once before... can't wait to see what paths Spain will offer up through your pen and your gifts. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's off to Spain we go.. and I am excited to see where this leads. Most excellent dear Lady. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Beautiful, I really enjoy reading your work. Flawless from what I can see. Cheers Once you are truly insane, it’s all picnics with Kafka after that. See, it’s the process of going crazy that you gotta worry about. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...the romance of spain is heavy on the cheeks where a kiss lingers. You caught me in it. ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna thank you so much mantillas are so beautiful mysterious Karilea I would love to read your mantilla poem … thank you as always thank you Nancy I’m happy you are coming along… thank you so much Edward… oh Martie you know the romance of Spain thank you… dos besos to you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, you do such sexy german, enjoyed this lady dance |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear Stranger... I love the language you speak too... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...a friend is saving for an European vacation, and I...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oops! I'm feeling a little envy again James... have a wonderful time |
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