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Open Poetry #39

Slow Burn

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-10-02 05:02 PM

With just her voice
She ignited a slow burn
Casual glances from pictures
So many mysteries to learn

To dive in and explore
And for more than that, he yearned
All that is missing in his life
For all of her heat, he burned

She radiates the glow
Another head is turned
He lays down in the fire
Of a very slow burn

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-10-02 05:25 PM

Thinking this over...
You know?
Sounds like a sizzle...a great steak...
perfection should never be rushed!
Great write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-10-02 05:41 PM

After reading TD's comments,
a whole springboard of other thoughts
came to mind,
but that would get this moved to another area.

Wonderful work here! A good read, 24/7.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-02 08:04 PM

Real Good Job..I Liked it..
Wonderful Poem.

See you..

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

4 posted 2006-10-02 08:41 PM

Awesome job!

Really loved!!!

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