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The Other Sun
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The Other Sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: The Other Sun My eyes are shut yet see the sun A valley full of emerald green A golden field of flowers spun A ballet full of joyous scene And here I lay me down to sleep To make a hammock of a web To dream my dreams of phantoms reap And wait the silver moon to ebb It is my choice of nightly spore A place I go of rainbows bend My thing of wile that I adore That serves me pleasure in it’s wend There is no harm in dreams of sweet A piece of candy spun at night There is no harm in dreaming treat A bit of love to make it right Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir T "Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore." ~ and when that day does finally come, one of God's true earth angels will be returning Home.  You have such a lovely spirit ~ but may it remain with we Earthlings for many a year to come!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, From a spirit to an Angel.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, we all go to heaven's door each nite as we slumber...and yes, one day...it will open, allowing entry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus LOL not for a while yet I hope. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I've been nourishing my dreams..sometimes they are more real than awake is. Can I have some of yours..they're lovely!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie LOL just grab a hand hull.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this repost of some wonderful candy, Sy. I'm not one for sweets, more a salty person myself, but this filled the bill.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you dear. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"There is no harm in dreams of sweet A piece of candy spun at night There is no harm in dreaming treat A bit of love to make it right" no harm at all Sir Sy lovely dreams sweet prince... |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
Such a wonderfully written poem. I always enjoy your work. Thank you for all your thoughts... BK |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you for the flowers. Nikerlz Thank you for the lovely comment. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Yes! Heres to this dream come true! Robert |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There is no harm in dreams of sweet A piece of candy spun at night There is no harm in dreaming treat A bit of love to make it right Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore. wonderful insight |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy! I'm back from vacation and needed to hurry in to read you! I've missed your morning pearls of wisdom so much! ~Big hugs, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Robert Frazier Yours and mine. LeeJ Thank you sweety. Nancy Hugs back, missed you. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
That everlasting day which sings us into consciouness! Lovely~ you leave my heart smiling. ~Karen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahah! So that is why I have put on weight? I will remember your advise sir. Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, Thanks for the lovely. Sharon, I like em a little on the plump side. Randy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore." Yes, I believe we all do and will also stay but until that someday - bring on the candy!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh sir Sey, this is absolutely beautiful writing and I dare say, a new favorite from you. Nicely done, sir king of rhyme!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Candy, name your choice. perhapsGentle Spirit A very sweet reply, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hello sweet sy  My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Good morning sweet. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is no harm in dreams of sweet A piece of candy spun at night There is no harm in dreaming treat A bit of love to make it right Especially when dreams are all we have left. *S* Beautiful work, dear friend! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore If I were more the poet, and I had written this gem, it would be my signature...so very much it is a part of me..... thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
luminosity Thank you my dear. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A very articulate piece, love the last two lines. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
D.Lester Young Thank you for the read and nice reply. |
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