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whispers of ra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I didn't expect those kind of flavors when sipping from the river of ra on the downside of heaven where shisan worshiped her dragon from behind the curtain of stone I saw the faces of dolls there on her shelves in the magic kingdom as she dressed up in women's clothing and gaudy overcoats with no flashing but a mind's eye that knew the serpents as well as I from her dreams and then there was the poet too in her white gown luxuary waiting under waterfalls for healing waiting under darkness for sin I could have worshiped her in time if there had been but a heartbeat something that stirred the sand and made wonder steps appear something more than just the glass from the closed windows she stood behind ___________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Sir, go knock again she's probably waiting  good morning... |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
through a looking glass darkly we gaze though now tis only a smokey gray in the light of day you may find tis only a mirror that's left behind come night scry if you might the lady in white materializes .... gazes through... wondering... who are you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I could have worshiped her in time if there had been but a heartbeat something that stirred the sand and made wonder steps appear something more than just the glass from the closed windows she stood behind" it's those endings that always leave one... wanting for more Always a pleasure to read you  M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
as well as I from her dreams and then there was the poet too in her white gown luxuary waiting under waterfalls for healing waiting under darkness for sin ------------------------------------- Gocé de su arte en este señor Dark del pedazo Mi opinión de las mentes usted es siempre buena. Gracias mi amigo, por el pleaure de leer este hermoso escriben. (forgive my rusty Espanol.) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"waiting under waterfalls for healing waiting under darkness for sin I could have worshiped her in time if there had been but a heartbeat something that stirred the sand" sad and beautiful... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Daark, You can become somewhat contagious.... Enjoy your style...really do. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
listen closely Stranger heartbeats are easy to miss... beautiful work |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so many 'if onlys' so many lonelies windows painted frosted glass hearts fall shattered the broom of time sweeping past |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks to each of you you smile me with your reviews |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
I agree with Nakd...your endings are always so much more. Like a beginning to something new and more wonderful that we, the reader are dying to know. |
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