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Wanderer Of Sable Caves
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Wanderer Of Sable Caves |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wanderer Of Sable Caves Introspection is damp Dirt floor, a blanket bars the door Past is a ship that relates to tears Leaving on collected rain of many years Recollection is a lamp Footfalls that are like snow, now quiet as I go Moving down a staircase underground Thin, the skin of brittle leaves enfolded down The light is better here Shining from the center of my hemisphere Warm, the will and willing glows Understanding only comes when patience goes Despite mystique made clear Silently resilient, finds enraptured walls Solitude is just the salve salvation calls The Autumn night may cool, entreating Summer cruel Just leave your game face on the tabletop It won’t be long ‘til winters boot will drop But I am wandering in sable caves Copyright Kkh 9/29/06 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, the light is better here  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Warm, the will and willing glows Understanding only comes when patience goes Despite mystique made clear Silently resilient, finds enraptured walls Solitude is just the salve salvation calls Awesome...yessum, it is...they are... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Understanding only comes when patience goes" wow! pwerful line that one I like this poem... |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Nice...I am always reminded of memories when I smell dampness of the rain or solitude, but I can never remember in details.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautifully safe place, in sound and sense... well done, Kathleen. |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
I think I will be back to explain just why this poem is just amazing... At the moment I am just to busy applauding. This is so going in my library. "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like a good place to be. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The Autumn night may cool, entreating Summer cruel Just leave your game face on the tabletop It won’t be long ‘til winters boot will drop But I am wandering in sable caves sounds like hibernation time brr....... ************************************* Once kind upon the feathered white now she bites, her tender rains turned stormy nights, in frightened flight, the girl of summer seeks the shelter from the winter plight ******************************* thanks for the muse inspiration |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Can I just say that you are immensely talented? I noticed the alliteration too, very nice touch. |
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