Open Poetry #39 |
The way day should be |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A notebook in my saddle bag A road with change attire A swag to lay upon the ground No stress and my desire The changing sound of creatures pass The gums that share their cover A day to call as company The world just how I love her To wander where the soul is free From now until eternity Taking notes along the way To sleep at night, then greet each day |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walkabout well, m'friend. And bring back some stories. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
*smile* This is wonderful. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Rick! Yeppers! "The way day should be"!!! Good to read you again! Hope you stay awhile this time! Loving Light, Linda |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Your poem is so evocative of wide-open spaces and freedom--I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Cheers, Bill |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey Rick, Great to hear from u again Nice Work mate. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A big thank you to you all my friends, always wonderful to see you visit. Hope you are all well, take care till again. Sincerely Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yippeee, this was like a walk with light, caring, only for love....to absorb all positive energy... Good one Rick |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"no stress and my desire" yep, the perfect day! enjoyed this much! Robert |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, nice to see you here my friend, you know the feeling, I can tell. Thanks for the reply, always good to see you visit. Robert, thank you for your reply, good to have you visit, much appreciated. To you both, thank you for the replies and visits, be well and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Yeah, that's a happy day indeed! enjoyed. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ah, to wander . . . Who wouldn't? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This has such a happy feeling about it. Much enjoyed! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love seeing the world through your eyes. Hugs for you ... aziza |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
FNG, thank you for your reply, it was a happy thought my friend while I walked in the bush and I did enjoy the moment. Krawdad, we should all wander my friend, thank you for your reply, good to see you visit. iliana, I was happy her my friend, it had been a good day, the thought and words made it better, good to see you here thank you. I love seeing your replies aziza, thank you for replying today, I hope you are well and finding the fun side of life, for me it is just too busy and not enough time to do the things enjoyed. Hugs back To you all my friends, great to see you all here, again thank you for your words and time, till again be well and take good care. Sincerely Rick |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a great poem to start my day with! Thanks Rick! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Neeraja, nice to see you here my friend, thank you so much for the reply, have a lovely day and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
vandana, glad you could come and visit here my friend, thank you for your reply, as well enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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