Open Poetry #39 |
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Lost |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 30 |
Look into the mist, A compass is backwards, The map upside-down, There you have to find me The sound of nothingness, Echoing all around, Just the sound of your stale breathing, Filling the aimless void. The snap of a twig under your carefully placed shoe shoots lightning down your spine, A gasp, An eerie silence, A shrouded figure is beyond This chilling mirage, A mirror image, The enclosed tightening space, Constricting you A corner is found, In the morning mist, Footsteps behind, Your heart races A hand on your shoulder, A sudden gasp, A view, A sigh of relief The sweet embrace in the closest quarters, A kiss in the mist, Followed by a swift departure, Hands parting like silk softened lips I go into the morning mist, To be forever lost, Just, like, this… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you feel the touch, are you then found? Lovely lighting here, Joseph. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This..this, is breathtaking! Wonderful writing. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the trip ![]() |
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um_idk Junior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 32minnesota |
i agree with Enchantress |
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