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Open Poetry #39

Lightstreets of Venice

MukkaKukka
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since 2006-09-18

Posts 88
Finland

0 posted 2006-09-22 10:55 AM

Venetian blinds

Sun in the western horizon

fatigue persists

but this cosmic love

The arabesques of slighty closed lids

Lashes.

I rock my head back and forth

Eyes closed

Slightly parted blinds

Lightstairs rocking to and fro

Enforced memory

The sun is setting

A passenger

Drinking light from a fountain, trees block

Splash and Flash

From a a window of a moving monster.

william foos
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since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

1 posted 2006-09-28 03:08 PM

this was intresting and i did like it i thought there was a deeper meaning behind this write keep doing well
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-09-28 10:43 PM

vivid scene here

I love it

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-09-28 11:10 PM

an enjoyable ride
strobe-like

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