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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-09-27 02:17 PM

~Noted
beautifully
Rewind of a remind
that you are held in loving heart
until the all of time drifts slowly by
Reeling you back to waiting arms
Ache to hold you once more
in soft recall
Noted~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-09-27 02:18 PM

oh Marge, this is dreamy beautiful!! I do love your notes lady!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-09-27 02:23 PM

An especially beautiful rictameter Marge.
Very nicely penned..
Reminds me I need to try this form.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2006-09-27 02:27 PM

loved this Marge, it's perfect!

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

4 posted 2006-09-27 04:01 PM

I love this Marge

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2006-09-27 04:35 PM

Have to agree with Gentle Spirirt here, a fine write Marge, thank you..

Goldenrose.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-09-27 05:35 PM

Way to go MT....you are the resident
expert at this....with a few others that
want to learn...

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

7 posted 2006-09-27 06:36 PM

How nice, Marge. How lucky that someone is..to have been loved so.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-09-27 10:42 PM

a gentle love note
Marge
so well done...

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

9 posted 2006-09-27 10:52 PM

Just plain lovely!

Sandra

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

10 posted 2006-09-27 10:52 PM

The songs of the heart are so beautiful....

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

11 posted 2006-09-28 12:55 PM

Dear Marge: Very touching and caring write.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2006-09-28 01:14 AM

Beautifully said, Marge....this my third-or-so visit to this poem since you posted it....and as my old old friend Dingus (whose first public verse went into the same issue of the same junior high school newspaper as mine -- yes LW, ol' Ed remembers!) said up there, lucky is the one who holds that magic ticket.

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______________Ratleader______________

jody5
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since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

13 posted 2006-09-28 02:54 AM

Marge I liked that so much I came out of hibernation to tell you so. It made me feel really good.

Hugs Kimberly

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

14 posted 2006-09-28 08:25 AM

impressive

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

15 posted 2006-09-28 09:14 AM

"Noted" is most definitely note-worthy!

You have such a love-ly spirit, Willow White Feather.

EO

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2006-09-28 12:45 PM

Marge/sis

The book you write your love in is very full...so full it gives back!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2006-09-28 02:41 PM

You all are so gracious to this poetess~
Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

18 posted 2006-09-29 09:35 PM

You do these so well, Marge. But then, you are very talented.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

19 posted 2006-09-29 09:53 PM

Love these short wonderful lines you write, my friend!

jwesley

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

20 posted 2006-10-01 01:27 PM

Thanks SweetChickie and JWesley~
I appreciate each comment~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

21 posted 2007-05-02 01:13 PM

rewind...remind..recall what a funtion of memory of love.

beautiful.

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