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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~Notedbeautifully Rewind of a remind that you are held in loving heart until the all of time drifts slowly by Reeling you back to waiting arms Ache to hold you once more in soft recall Noted~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Marge, this is dreamy beautiful!! I do love your notes lady!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An especially beautiful rictameter Marge. Very nicely penned.. Reminds me I need to try this form. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved this Marge, it's perfect!  |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I love this Marge |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Have to agree with Gentle Spirirt here, a fine write Marge, thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Way to go MT....you are the resident expert at this....with a few others that want to learn... |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
How nice, Marge. How lucky that someone is..to have been loved so. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a gentle love note Marge so well done... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Just plain lovely! Sandra |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The songs of the heart are so beautiful.... sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very touching and caring write. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautifully said, Marge....this my third-or-so visit to this poem since you posted it....and as my old old friend Dingus (whose first public verse went into the same issue of the same junior high school newspaper as mine -- yes LW, ol' Ed remembers!) said up there, lucky is the one who holds that magic ticket. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge I liked that so much I came out of hibernation to tell you so. It made me feel really good. Hugs Kimberly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
impressive  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Noted" is most definitely note-worthy! You have such a love-ly spirit, Willow White Feather.   EO |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis The book you write your love in is very full...so full it gives back! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You all are so gracious to this poetess~ Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You do these so well, Marge. But then, you are very talented. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love these short wonderful lines you write, my friend! jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks SweetChickie and JWesley~ I appreciate each comment~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
rewind...remind..recall what a funtion of memory of love. beautiful. |
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