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Evening Soiree
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Evening Soiree |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Smiles are brought when you talk risqué and ask would I attend your private soiree? With subtle laughter in pondered seconds I then answer I think that I could do that with you most certainly yes that I want to, too When you whisper in my ear I'm left to shiver at the mere glance of steel from eyes so keen deep into pools of emerald green And when I ask what should I wear? Your only answer is that stare daring me wear red on pale covered lightly with lacey veil so we can walk along the quay then after we've supped on spread of buffet and we've had our fill of delicious feast desert awaits to be our treat. {seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna} |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
And when I ask what should I wear? Your only answer is that stare This is probably the sexiest thing I've read in a long time...whether it was intended as such, I don't know. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very, very nice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs...see's candy? kewl stuff ms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@DS. Wonderful write here Donna... Great images you have conjured in my mind. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Refugee, thanks for peaking in. Dixie, glad you enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dark, maybe just a bit of divinity made with pure cream would be delish?  thanks for the look see. Nancy...laffin at you lady, glad it brought images to mind, hope they were happy ones. Hugs sweet friend of mine.... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
and we've had our fill of delicious feast desert awaits to be our treat. Uh-hummmm!! Sounds like good dessert! LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hey Ethel, you snuck in on me there.. I was thinking Strawberry parfait, or maybe raspberry sorbet would top it off perfectly? Thanks hon, so happy to see you here. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This poem certainly got my attention,very well written and so loving too, thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Phil, for stopping by, nice to see you again. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sounds to me like it is going to be quite an evening....You made me hungry....now, checking the fridge.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
laffin @ you Barry....thanks hope you found something good in the fridge. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And when I ask what should I wear? Your only answer is that stare" oh my a soiree is it? and with dessert too? I love this Donna makes me smile... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This is soooooo very nice! Well worth the multiple reads! Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kate, I am so pleased that it brought you a smile, thank you. Sandra! Thank you so much, I appreciate your visits.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Goodness! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mmm! Mmm! Mmm! That's my kinda dessert! An evening ~ and night!!! ~ to remember! Sighing, here!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna....sounds like the best kind of date night!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari...  geezz woman....thank ya... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhh Linda, only but if in my dreams lady....thank you sweetie!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, sure would be a delightful time me'thinks......thanks for stoppin by today. Hugs. |
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