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Open Poetry #39

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um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

0 posted 2006-09-27 01:45 AM

a felings of pain and hurt is what i feel
somtimes i want to wake up out of this dream
for its not real
i made some stupid mistakes
that haunt me everyday
like saying for what i did i will pay
i wish i could tell you how i feel
and let you no my hurt
i wish my feelings would just convert
i am changing and sometimes dont no how to deal
but slowly these wounds will heal
so please dont worry mom i will be ok
its just a stage
but i am always me no matter how far i sway
i will come back and get straightend out
but right now i have things to take care
so trust me and dont doubt

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2006-09-27 01:55 AM

So poignant. But, you know -- I really hang on to the thought that everything we go through makes us the people we become.

"i made some stupid mistakes
that haunt me everyday"

I think we all have been down this road. Haunting mistakes can make us stronger and more developed people.

I look forward to reading many more of your poems.

Welcome.
aziza

um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

2 posted 2006-09-27 01:59 AM

thanks i dont no what else to say rite now tired and slow

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-09-27 07:37 AM

I agree with Aziza on not only your sensitive work, but on her take on mistakes. We are, by design, mandated to make mistakes. How else can we learn. It is the repetition of the same mistakes that leads us away from growth. Keep feeling, and keep writing.

Sandra

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-09-27 10:53 AM

Welcome to Passions

um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

5 posted 2006-09-29 03:13 PM

thank you for taking the time to read

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