Open Poetry #39 |
Always, A Lady |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
With hair tinted in hues vermillion and copper sometimes pulled up in prim and proper, my business suit look hangs around my neck while other times, I'm a lazy sweat suit curled up in blankets of warm while emotions flow through my pen whether of light, or of storm. At times you can see a country girl, denim and flannel walking through fields of colors painted against a skyline but sometimes, I am more... I'm another adorned in timeless satin and lace with hair softly curled in trace falling around the face of romance is someone that you might see if you looked closely at me. Then... on those special times when the daring woman comes out dressed in night life, silk stockings and blouse cut so low glimpses of just a little more than society might feel should be shown. Yes, some might call me trash while others might say I have class and some choose to call me baby but in all of these times, who ever it is that I am; that I've chosen to be, held within each of these beats this heart, always, a lady. 11-9-2001 revised 9-25-06 |
||
© Copyright 2006 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved | |||
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember this one...nicely expressed, Donna. M |
||
playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
who ever it is that I am that I've chosen to be, held within each of these beats this heart, always, a lady Oh dear. Hm. I should stop saying that. Perhaps "Wow" instead? Lovely, flowing, truthful poem brimming with quiet confidence and... well I don't know but it caught at me. I loved this piece. xxx |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you both, much. Good morning. |
||
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
At times you can see a country girl, denim and flannel walking through fields of colors painted against a skyline but sometimes, I am more... I'm another the many faces of our souls marvelous and delightful write, loved the wake up happy feeling this drew on my heart and mind....thank you |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only a lady can wear so many suits that fit so nicely |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dixie said it best... and I'm glad to see this one again! |
||
Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Describes it well, this prism that is the human soul. We are all so many things, and always beautiful. Well done. |
||
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
lady and a woman oh Donna I like this so much! |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
After messing this up the first time.... I'll just abbreviate and say Yahuh, Yep, she is!! |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |