A Poem For An Unknown Girl

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Open Poetry #39

A Poem For An Unknown Girl

MukkaKukka
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since 2006-09-18

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0 posted 2006-09-24 08:51 PM

I`m fixing the dairy shelf

A girl comes, picks a carton of milk, smiles

"Hello"

"Hi there."

In her eyes I see my own beauty reflected.

I can`t shake my grandfathers genes

That draw browneyed beings

And I`m oblivious

To these miracles of secret workings.

But she`s thirsty for blond milk

I`m tied

I scream as I look into the sun

The next time I see her

She`s with

Another sailor.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

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Waukegan

1 posted 2006-12-31 08:05 PM

Very good
in a sneaky way

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-12-31 09:39 PM

I like the underpinnings of this write...

Thank you!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-01-03 05:22 PM

Enjoyed...you could join the Navy...James

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2007-01-03 05:27 PM

Doncha just HATE sailors

Sunshine

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5 posted 2007-01-03 09:30 PM

Just had to read this again.

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2007-01-04 07:44 AM

glad I didn't miss this

LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-01-04 07:57 AM

loved this immensely

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2007-01-04 09:22 AM

Well done!
Very much enjoyed the read.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-01-04 07:12 PM

"In her eyes I see my own beauty reflected.

I can`t shake my grandfathers genes" ~ Hmm! I'm intrigued!

~ Could you post a photo of your grandfather? lol

Glad to see you posting again! It's been awhile!

the quell
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since 2006-07-19

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Liverpool, UK

10 posted 2007-01-04 07:15 PM

an interesting write!! Much enjoyed.

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
- The Mighty Boosh

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2007-01-06 10:12 PM

oh I'm pleased I read this! - good write!
RDB

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