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morbid
Junior Member

since 2007-01-05

Posts 22
Arkansas USA

0 posted 2007-01-05 09:57 AM

Don't tell anyone what you know.
Don't say one word to yourself.
Don't speak your unconscience to your conscience.
I can hear.
I can see.
I can feel, touch, and smell.
Surrounding your whirlpool.
Can the wax beat the flame?
Surrounding you black hole.
Can the glass shatter the rock?
Getting closer to their poential
of the things essential.
Don't wonder how forward you are.
Don't care what I think
Don't like what I do.
Surrounding you mind.
Will the sun revolve around your world?
Will your world revolve around you?
Falling farther from their potential
Falling farther from the things essential
Don't tell. . .

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-01-05 10:05 AM

"Can the wax beat the flame?
Surrounding you black hole.
Can the glass shatter the rock?"

liked this

morbid
Junior Member

since 2007-01-05

Posts 22
Arkansas USA

2 posted 2007-01-05 10:09 AM

ty

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-01-05 10:18 AM

This is neat. At first it seemed to me that it was using too many words to say what you mean, then all of a sudden I got into the swing. By the end of it, I was caught up completely. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-01-05 10:49 AM

nicely done

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-01-05 12:03 PM

Very nicely penned.
Welcome to Passions!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2007-01-05 01:33 PM

Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed your first contribution.

believe in what your heart feels...

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

7 posted 2007-01-05 02:14 PM

Will the sun revolve around your world?
Will your world revolve around you?
Falling farther from their potential
Falling farther from the things essential
Don't tell. . .

Siyo Morbid how many,too many see only self within their dreams,never understanding until another touches the soul we can not give of self completely!
Sigi!

granny!

morbid
Junior Member

since 2007-01-05

Posts 22
Arkansas USA

8 posted 2007-01-05 03:34 PM

loL
"Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed your first contribution."
second contribution
*cough*dark poetry*cough*
but thank you

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-01-06 09:51 PM

I liked your words here.. RDB

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