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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-23 05:27 PM

A solitary figure stepped into the light
She moved with silence from the darkness of night
The lamp shone down with an eerie glow
She felt the urge to run – the need to go
But standing tall she knocked upon the door
A voice rang out, “He is here no more!”
Again, she rapped with a stronger blow
The voice spoke up, “He had to go!”
She waited there as she decided what to do
She could wait ‘til he returned or she could go too
The choices were not the most pleasing of plans
Feet firmly planted, she decided to do all that she can
She pulled out a wire and picked the large lock
The door swung open wide to her greatest of shock
She didn’t really think that the wire would work
Adding this skill to her resume could be a great perk
She entered the hall and smelled the dank air
It was as if she felt him standing there
A shiver ran down her body so slight
And she knew that she needed his arms to hold her tight
Softly she called to him but there was no reply
Her heart beat so quickly – her throat became dry
She set out to find him with a determined stance
She felt him so close.She felt his steely glance
Oh, how she needed him.Oh, how her body did cry.
Then a movement beside her caught her beckoning eye.
He stood in the shadows and leaned against the wall
She gazed silently upon him as he stood straight and tall
She fell to her knees as her eyes slowly fell
He spoke very softly as he welcomed her to hell.

aziza

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-09-23 09:55 PM

you know those little hairs on
the back of your neck?
mine are standing up
dang lady...
good one

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-01-02 10:49 PM

I really like it the rhyming was bang on too...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

3 posted 2007-01-02 11:16 PM

Oh, how she needed him.Oh, how her body did cry.
Then a movement beside her caught her beckoning eye.
He stood in the shadows and leaned against the wall
She gazed silently upon him as he stood straight and tall
She fell to her knees as her eyes slowly fell
He spoke very softly as he welcomed her to hell.

aziza

OH,MY! Aziza how well you carry one into places they do not wish to be,my heart followed and shiver in fear!You write a very good story to tell.

granny!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2007-01-03 02:37 AM

Aziza - Where you lead I follow ... even into hell. Good poem.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-01-03 07:01 AM

whew, a very good poem and write...held my attention all the way through....

The blue pages are certainly endowed with some fine talent..that is why I love it here.

Extraordinary write....loved this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2007-01-03 07:24 AM

whew!

*shivers*

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

7 posted 2007-01-03 04:40 PM

so many unopened doors......and they don't always answer every knock do they?

~~~kingsangel~~~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2007-01-03 05:09 PM

Ya gotta be careful which locks ya try to pick

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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