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Open Poetry #39

Embodiment Of The Moon

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-09-23 12:17 PM

Embodiment Of The Moon

Elliptical, rendering glow of your essence
A tear, that soaks engrained my wooden heart
Petrified, to beat beneath the light of silence

Almost sheer, illumined causing calm
To kneel or lay upon bent grasses of gold
Tender is the sky in its velvet emotions

Catch my breath, wings upon the stir of air
Bowling a scoop of laughter sent up high
Moving the masks of trees in the dark

Peering through long arms of whispers
Taking form that delights itself upon me
What was still, the sound of your voice

Fluent in star-struck, an energy apart from time
Reflecting harmonic waves subliminal
To wait…said to wait in the bask of always near

Copyright Kkh 9/23/06

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-09-23 01:55 PM

I always have to break out the dictionary
when you are posting...you teach us all a
lot. Never stop, you are an invaluable
part of this poetic machine...

I, on the other hand...some day I'll be
close to your caliber.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-23 11:03 PM

"To kneel or lay upon bent grasses of gold"

always quality
TD
you did it again...

MukkaKukka
Member

since 2006-09-18

Posts 88
Finland

3 posted 2006-09-23 11:10 PM

I like the mask of trees

that brings in mind the Buddhist saying about the trees that are trees to a novice, and after he has learned a bit, they`re no longer

but when he is fully learned...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-09-24 12:54 PM

sheer perfection!

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

5 posted 2006-09-26 01:07 PM

"...said to wait in the bask of always near"

That is poetic muscles being flexed right there. Reading some more...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-09-26 02:47 PM

awesome and beautiful....we seem to be on the same kind of mind waves this day...in somewhat of a different arrangement, yet, feeling, touching the same evening, same trees...
two great minds think alike, right?
hehe

Seriously Lady, you've got gold here...
magical read, enjoyed.

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