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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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sunset gloom quarter mile wind cold sand now stand ankle deep in it watch the sun give up and drown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Today was the first cool day after an even chillier night..I loved the feel of the sun shining and the cool fresh air... Fall has arrived~~ and I loved your poem...sometimes the gloom has a calming feel to it. M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
It does seem as if the sunset does just what you describe, as you describe. Quietly eloquent. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed..I can feel the changing in this poem, like the sun is falling into the cusp.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But it doesn't go without leaving some of its glory behind. *S* This is melancholy at its best, my friend. *S* |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
can I ditto suthern? *very knowing look* she loves it when I do...and she said it perfectly  |
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