Open Poetry #39 |
Expression |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rewrite: Expression Of fantasies my stock and trade In wily wiles and dream cascade Where pendulum swings steady time And disregards the sweet of rhyme There lies my spool of fantasy Its thread my stock of ecstasy From moments gone of pass and loss Where beauty lies of glass emboss I leave the weary of my day Sail a ship through sandman’s way Find a shoal where sleeps a dove And spend the night an Isle of love I build my castles on its shore Dispense the grace I would and more I touch upon infinity Or close in its vicinity It is a pixel dot of peace That helps me with my present lease |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I was sitting her staring at the screen, looking for that one poem that would burn a thought into my mind ... I found it !!!!! 'I leave the weary of my day Sail a ship through sandman’s way Find a shoal where sleeps a dove And spend the night an Isle of love I build my castles on its shore Dispense the grace I would and more I touch upon infinity Or close in its vicinity It is a pixel dot of peace That helps me with my present lease' Does NOT get better than this~ LOVE that 'pixel dot of peace'~ How beautiful you are ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I read this and see what I've been missing all this time!! I'm glad to be able to read your morning word weavings, Sy thank God for internet right in my room LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you for this dove. passing, You never fail me. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I leave the weary of my day Sail a ship through sandman’s way Find a shoal where sleeps a dove And spend the night an Isle of love" just delightful Sir Sy... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wonderful read Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, I delight in your reply. Snowflake, Thank you so much. |
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