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Open Poetry #39

To someone

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

0 posted 2006-09-19 09:57 AM

Unknow he looks
Seeing her there
He looks upon her
Not knowing what to say
Sleepy he watchs
As Justbleu turns from him
Away she goes
With a man
Who will hurt her in the end
Leaving someone in the wake
That loves her always.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2006-09-21 07:21 PM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-09-21 08:18 PM

I do love this

a bit sad, touching

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

3 posted 2006-09-21 10:17 PM

thank you James

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

4 posted 2006-09-21 10:18 PM

Passing Shadows, well the name there in the poem is the one i am talking about. you might be able to see some of her work here on the webpage

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-09-21 11:16 PM

good write Neotec...

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

6 posted 2006-09-22 12:47 PM

thank you My Lady : ( but it is a sad one that the person can't see it

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