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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my mind was handsome with fingers and you were many mouths pressing your lips to shhh sounds touching my thumbs with your eyes telling me of a meadow of hands and their pleasure in bronze when the sun rose to dance and they folded to worship just the edges of her dawn there was laughter then as our mouths made water and we wrote our poems with the pens of our whispers and the ink spend of our saliva __________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can't think of a better way to start the day than with my daily dose of DS. *grin* This is beyond lovely, sure do love when you let that big ole' bear loose.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks hon, you make me smile |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you write pretty, you do it so effortlessly that one would think you sat in some shadow light just miming hands and watching pens float. My Tuesday is now terrific. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, it is just the bronze morning nude at my window..she keeps me oozing ink, thanks lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
shhh is the only thing that can be said in the presence of a mind handsome with fingers the poem sings and cries Stranger... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, as long as there is laughter too ya know...thanks hon |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
here, white fire shadows fade come and gone flicker talk I wonder of handsome minds meadows and hands barefoot, do I dare linger there? (trespassing lightly, Daark) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
As always, Dark, I am in awe. I didn't get a chance to congratulate you on your 6,000 th, so I shall do it now. It is always a pleasure to spend a few moments meandering through your thoughts. I have said it before, and I repeat it now, I am truly one of your biggest fans. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I missed the party too Stranger let me say this... nobody does it better nobody does it half as good as you Stranger Stranger, you're the best... (blatantly lifted from Carly Simon who also missed the party) congratulations |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks to you fair listener _______________ ms sandra, you bless me lady friend, slow hugs of thank you _______________ ladyone, you and me and ms C and a dusty red banana..sorry janis but thanks ladyone |
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