Open Poetry #39 |
Lullaby |
Spike Daft Junior Member
since 2006-09-12
Posts 23CA, USA |
Lullaby Sing to me a lullaby Sing of the wind whisp’ring though dark pines Sing of a warm and welcome light And soothe away these hateful times Sing to me of peace and sunsets Sing of dusk falling by the lake Sing until I succumb to sleep And sing again when I awake For with each weaving of your words The soothing salve that is your voice I cannot help but linger near And listen as though I have no choice With each word you choose to speak or sing I am lulled into a deeper trance And I sway to the rhythm of your voice A slow and soothing inner dance So sing to me of better times Of long autumn walks and peaceful miles Sing of a world where no one hates Of caring and peace and friendly smiles And I will sleep, and I will know Of all the wonders you have known And listen to your lullaby Until my dreams come call me home Grey Matter Custom Images |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Andrea, I think this is a lovely verse. It flows nicely and rests gently against the heart. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So very soft and lovely of a write, much enjoyed your words here. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Of long autumn walks and peaceful miles Sing of a world where no one hates Of caring and peace and friendly smiles And I will sleep, and I will know Of all the wonders you have known And listen to your lullaby Until my dreams come call me home" Beautiful Andrea! My favourite lines above. With a smile I welcome you to Passions! ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sweet lullaby Andrea... |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
this would be so sweet to a melody that would make any loud child go right to sleep great job i see what i write and write what i see |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can almost hear the melody the words are so lyrical. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Excellent Work |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are equally talented with both pen and brush! Not only are you a fine writer, but you are a fine artist as well! I checked out your gallery of artwork, and if I were to pick a favorite, it would be "Moon Bath". Mind you, each and every one of them was a fine display of artistic talent. Big hug to a talented aesthete! EA |
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