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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Writing poetry can remind me Of hunching over in a dark alley Holding a fist full of dice To pleading lips Before tossing them - Praying, hoping, gambling – That I will find the right combination Only to see scattered syllables Amid my incomplete poetry puzzle aziza |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
I like this, aziza--a perfectly good write about not being able to write! Cheers, Bill |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh wow do I ever equate...... I have spiral pads full of incomplete poetry....some pages with just a line or a verse, some filled and lapped over onto the next page. Every time I manage to tear a page or two out of one, it seems I'll get some random new idea, and -- Presto, new page! Which translates to....gee whiz, I've got hundreds of failures sitting there..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Oh yes I can relate ,sounds so like me , I have many unfinished poems , Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have a folder that is stock full of incomplete poetry "puzzles"! It's fun to revisit them and find something to work with when the timing is 'write'! Cute poem!  EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah aziza I call my file marginalia and it’s full… “Of hunching over in a dark alley Holding a fist full of dice To pleading lips Before tossing them” great analogy... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... and understand all too well! *S* |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Alison, I keep a file on my desktop with phrases that are waiting to bloom into something with meaning. Half-feelings still in the process of growing up. I relate to this so well! Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I certainly do relate to this. Good writing, by the way. Hugs, Ethel |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
With time the puzzles will come together my friend, having the time to enjoy it is the hardship, your words are not so scattered, there is always a path that leads us to the meaning each time. Throw them around and let us enjoy the venture. Enjoyed once again aziza. Sincerely Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awesome! |
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